Loving the 'glass work eyes' and the 'wonder if she knows how much of her legs really show.'

And the mannequin line was something to be remembered, too.

Yes. Poetic. Much love. Much, much love.

(And if I ramble, as I seem to have a penchant for doing, this review will end up longer than the composition itself. And that would truly be a riot. Or a travesty. Ha.)

zexion the pedo. lawl i liked that leg line.

this whole thing was writen so prettily, jutt like that song, i like that song. and this fix.

prettyful z-unit!!

Interesting pairing, and I like the fact that you don't describe them, that we are just left to imagine them in our mind and they seem so vague and untouchable.

This piece was a bit less straight-forward, and I had to read a few lines over again to try to ponder their meaning. Plus it was so good I just HAD to read it again. XD

I hope things are going well for you, Zanisha. I'm barely on Gaia anymore...barely do anything fun anymore. School's tough...I'll e-mail you sometime, that would be nice to chat and not cram everything into a review. :>

Omgwtf why is this still so GOOD. xD Just. The... tidbits. They sound. So. Wow. O_O And it's like... thoughts. And. Omfg I don't know. xD -hasn't typed a review in forever.- And when I'm fangirling it's... not good. So. Yes. I will say it again. I love this. Muchly. :D ♥

CUTE! I really like this-you should continue it, like do one in Namine's perspective!

i love love love this song!
super super keep it up [; ♥

Oh my GOD. I didn't know that anyone else actually knew of the existence of this song. xD; I always get weird looks when I talk about Stone Sour~ Lovely song. One of my favorites.

But.

I can't believe I'm saying this. I loved the story, you seemed to make some sort of concrete imaging from the vague lyrics in the song, but. But. I don't like how about half the story is lyrics. D: You did well with them, believe me! And it must have been a fun challenge to incorporate them in your story. But I'm used to reading YOUR words, not someone else's, and while I'm getting some images and some words from Zanisha's style, I'm also getting a lot of Through Glass in the story. A bit too much. It makes me feel like I'm just reading the lyric sheet, really. >_>;

I mean, err... xD; That kinda came out wrong. Feels like I'm writing a review to someone who really needs pointers and not you. D;

I guess if you had extended the story a few hundred words more, than it wouldn't feel like the whole song condensed in a few paragraphs. You do use amazing lines with the lyrics in them, but they're so close together it gets repetitive and old, fast. The first two paragraphs are amazing--perfectly balanced between you and the song. But after that...

...Oh wow. I suppose this is completely different from the "OMG UR MY GOD!" reviews you usually get. xD;;

Ooh, I don't think I've ever read a ZexionxNamine story at all! I love your wording in this!

Heh, I guess I understand what you mean about your stories. I'm glad you're updating even more! ^_^ Yah, hopefully I'll update something soon.

Ooh, you listen to Stone Sour?

Lovely. ♥ NamineZexy!