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| lylahgrace 2008-02-04 ch 1,  | abuseI like it, but you need to follow up with a conclusion that gives her that chance, I think. |
| scarletwitch0 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseSob, Sob, BooHoo...I can't stop crying. Too true for many women, including myself. I had seven miscarriages. I did finally conceive with my son, who is a special blessing. I remind myself daily, even when he does something that wants to make me choke him. He's 10 now. |
| ????? 2008-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseHow bout a sequel? |
| ALIMOO1971 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abusepoor Sam i feel sorry for them and i know what they are going through, especaily Sam, i can't have children my self and i've been married for almost nine years, doctors siad the reason why cause i was born preture. good sad story through |
| BettyHall223 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseVery good but terribly sad. |
| SammieAtHome 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! It gives you a sense of longing an pain...you actually feel what they so sadly want and can't have... |
| pain in the mikta 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseAw! So sad and very touching... Nice balance between light and dark. Will there be a sequel? |
| dp 2008-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseSad but very nice story. |
| HDorothy 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseVery well written. Love Jack and the roast. Snort!! However knowing that Sam is the same age as A.T. and its been established by A.T. and the producers, I don't find Sam being barren plausible. Especially today when women are having babies at age 50 plus. According to your time line Sam would be 43. Is she high risk? Yep getting there, but clearly not in menopause or barren. Even if she is infertile, it has nothing to do with age and there are fertility drugs. I hope you write another chapter and give us a happy ending. VBG |
| lkhoward88 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseHeartbreakingly Good! |
| scottiedog 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abusePlease add another chapter! It is too sad to leave it like this! They could adopt a baby and love it like their own, i know that it's not the same but it will give Sam a chance to be a mom. Good Job! |
| Blood Dragon 2008-02-03 ch 1, anon. | abusevery plausible and realistic fic, great job! it wasn't THEY that left it too late, it was SAM that left it too late, always putting her career in front of Jack and their feelings, always putting her career before everything, before happiness, before family. she knew women can only have kids safely to 35, but she still put her career before her. anyway, great job! |
| E. Nagrom 2008-02-03 ch 1, | abuseaww poor Sam, that must be really heart breaking. E. |