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Reviews For: Left Behind

bookworm45
2008-06-14
ch 2,
abuseBeautiful. So beautiful.
burnbabyburn123
2008-02-21
ch 2,
abuseLoverly :)

It's one of my favourite stories at the moment and I hope you keep updating and soon! XD

Love it x
NoDakGrl
2008-02-03
ch 2,
abuseToo sweet. I like it. Now get back to Las Plagas! ;)
necira
2008-02-03
ch 2,
abuseand a great conclusion. the conversation between Greg and Sara was well done...and the butterflies a nice touch, especially since it was for Grissom.
necira
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abusewhat a great part one. I think that a lot of changes that you wrote happening in the lab seem very logical...and I love the new secretary, especially not being able to spell Sara's name. the way Grissom died was a nice touch, as nice as a death could be. and poor Ronnie, all that happening, and knowing she's always been the second choice for Greg.
Grand Puba of All The Smurf...
2008-02-03
ch 2,
abuseLanders angst? Brilliant! Except I think Greg's over Sara by now, and he is SO not pretending! Also, love the whole Gil twist.
PisceanPal23
2008-02-03
ch 2,
abuseWow, that's kind of sad, in an awesome way. I don't know, it seems really...fitting. I like it. Maybe its that phobia to change I have that makes this really sad, but the way that Sara comes back and helps Greg through his problems...I thought is was really sweet. Once again, an awesome piece. I'll check out the music when I have a faster internet connection, lol. Awesome wicked job:D
TheHamsterInMyMind
2008-02-03
ch 2,
abuseThis story is... STUNNING...
Gema227
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseMy goodness, this is the fic of my dreams! Spring Awakening, Sandle undertones, Dead!Grissom AND Landers? That is just too awsome.

As usual, your writing style was great, the confrontation of Catherine, Greg and Ronnie were really, really well written. I didn't really find it angsty so much as melencholiac (s/p). It tended to be a bit more angstlite. Still a really great piece none the less. Good job!

~Gema~
Kristafied
2008-02-03
ch 2,
abuseWow. I'm not sure if you plan to continue this, but it's excellent. Sad, but gritty and real. Outstanding story.
Salean
2008-02-03
ch 2,
abuseOh my goodness. I think I'm in shock. I was actually so close to tears by the end of this.
I have to say that this is one amazing story... all the emotion, the insecurities... it all felt so real. I don't usually write reviews like this, and I don't usually like anything with GSR in, but I just loved this story so much. Thank you for writing it.
RocketScientist2
2008-02-03
ch 1,
abuseI really loved this story - I read it straight through twice! It is so sad! Loved a good weep. I cannot believe you have not had more reviews. Your characterization is excellentI thought. They all seemed to respond in character. You kept the punchlines awaiting well to keep us reading. And I thought you filled out the feelings from immaturely to reality - rather than do the silly juvenile storyline like have Sara & Greg ride off to the sunset together. If you had your story would have bee VERY MUCH POORER! So Well Done! Keeping it honest to Gil was so much more likely. I just found it hard to believe she was gone for 5 years, would a year have worked? I am not sure. I think thought there is one chapter left? Brass & Sara? Only from him she would learn how Gil had been and he would tell her some honest truths as a "father" (good) would. They could share their grief and maybe provide each other with the support to go on? Anyway, your story made my day. I did enjoy it very much. Thank you.
Kegel
2008-02-03
ch 2,
abuseOh my... that was depressing. It also got me a bit back into the angry mode at Sara leaving without telling anyone besides Grissom. :( Spoiler alert... I've read she's actually coming back (JF interview lately).
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