Gah. You get inside people's heads, and do angst so very well.

I like this one. Pathos is one of my favorite things.

This was really beautiful! I loved how the last part of it was seen from outsiders point of view. I don't know what else to say, but I loved this fic.

Great story, very well written.

Very sad and bittersweet. You've painted a very powerful picture with your words.

This is great! Thanks so much for sharing it. Congrats!

WOW...It was great. You have a great ability to enable the reader to really see the story. Can't wait to read some more of your work.

oh that's so sad. good, but sad. kinda cathartic even.

Interesting. It's very sad, and the end was slightly crude, but very in character with the OC's you created. I like this one-shot, and it's very sad... It's different from any other SSHG one-shots I've read before, and I suppose that that's a good thing. I think what makes it different is the anguish, is the point of view that it ends in... how they don't really care. It's sad. And great writing. *goes off to ponder it* This fic makes me think. I think that's a good thing, too.

:'(

Wow, you had me crying in this one. Just so you know that. It was so good. I loved it.

This was such a romantic-tragic short story. So much emotion and so much pain. The banter between the two Auror's was so removed it made me even more sad. Very well done!

Lynda

*sniff* I hate sad stuff! *sniff* I really like this one-shot. I just wish it wasn't so sad...

just a little morbid...

Very interesting, I guess this is a one shot?