Aw...
Actually a bit senseless.
But still...
Aw...
I like it, it's good.

Sad but true :( At least Kaoru is prepared, I guess. But I like your ending; I wasn't expecting Hikaru to come back. Kaoru's more mature, def :)

I so totally agree with you... and I can so totally see this happening in the mangga or even the anime! ^.^
It's so unfair... I wish Hikaru would hurry up and realiza he actually loves Kaoru! LOL
HAHAHAHAHAHA!
Nice one! ^.~

aw.. that's so good and it fits so perfectly!!