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warsaw2
2009-12-12 . chapter 8
My favorite so far. I really liked number 10
xoxcrescentmoonxox
2009-12-09 . chapter 21
LOVED this one; it may have been my favorite yet. So many people abuse/hate Ginny, but the way you portrayed her was just lovely. I especially adored teh one when James asked her about her first year at Hogwarts - I had never thought about that possibility, but the way you wrote it, I wondered how it had never crossed my mind. And young Ginny's feelings for Ron was just heart wrenching.
xoxcrescentmoonxox
2009-12-09 . chapter 20
I don't love your Sirius, but I did like him, particulary his feelings towards Andromeda and Regulus. I think it's very realistic that he never forgave himself for thinking that Remus was the traitor.
xoxcrescentmoonxox
2009-12-06 . chapter 19
Such a great job of writing Roxanne's feelings towards Fred, the joke shop, and her own brother Fred. Funnily enough, though, my favorite was the first one when she talked about her name.
xoxcrescentmoonxox
2009-12-06 . chapter 18
Aw, cute! I liked the ... almost the ordinaryness, I suppose, of Molly II; it made her stand out among the diverse/eccentric Potter-Weasley brood. Loved the parts where she dealt with Percy leaving the family during the war expecially.
xoxcrescentmoonxox
2009-12-06 . chapter 17
Aw, I loved your Neville! He's not someone I single out to read stories about, but the way you wrote him made me wonder if I ought to. I liked the details about his children and the rest of the post-war stuff best.
xoxcrescentmoonxox
2009-12-06 . chapter 16
Your Narcissa is one of my favorites. You portrayed her elusive strenth absolutely wonderfully. I loved teh addition of the one son only tradition, and I loved Narcissa's responses to it. My favorites were the parts about Lucius, though; I liked how in your version, having Draco didn't make her love him any less.
xoxcrescentmoonxox
2009-12-05 . chapter 15
What wonderful layers of family relations! From Draco and Lucius to Draco and his own Scorpius, it was really well done. I doubt the parallel was purposeful, but it was neat how at the end you said that all he wanted was for Scorpius to be happy - just like Arthur Weasley did for his children.
xoxcrescentmoonxox
2009-12-05 . chapter 14
I love how feisty your Victoire is! My favorite was #6 when, all told, she was nearly hysterical by the time he asked her out - and she tried to join the betting pool for when they'd get together. I really liked how they named their first child Nymphadora as well.
xoxcrescentmoonxox
2009-12-05 . chapter 13
I really liked how your Arthur just wanted his children to be happy and the background you gave his thoughts on Bill, Charlie, and Fleur stemming off of that. The part about Tonks meaning a lot to him was lovely and heartbreaking as well.
xoxcrescentmoonxox
2009-11-30 . chapter 12
D'aw. Your Fred Weasley is just adorable. I'm so happy that you made him take after Fred and George in the pranking aspect; it's likely the way he would have been, and especially written the way you did, it wasn't cliched or anything in the least. I love that Percy is sort of his favorite uncle, too.
xoxcrescentmoonxox
2009-11-26 . chapter 11
Your Lysander is one of my favorites of your next-gen kids. I loved teh way you wrote him as taking an interest in Muggle computers and such; for some reason - although I'm not sure why - that seems like a thing someone with Luna's blood would enjoy.
xoxcrescentmoonxox
2009-11-26 . chapter 10
The last part was my favorite, how Molly thought she'd failed Fred and compared herself to Lily. I loved all the bits of Molly/Arthur you put in.
LucyBlue
2009-11-24 . chapter 53
For some reason, Lee's always been one of my favourite characters. And I liked this :) You did good!
LucyBlue
2009-11-24 . chapter 48
Minerva McGonnagal's chapter made me smile. Just because it was sort of...I don't know...Hopeful? That's the closest word I can think of :)
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