This is really good great job.

I really love how you wrote teh relationships between James and his siblings, particularly the bit about Lily and letting her play Seeker. The one about Aunt Fleur was very honest and real-life; every cousin has one aunt/uncle they just don't get along with ...

Gawd, it's about time we had something like this. Rowling has way too many characters, way too many potentially interesting personas, should they've been given elaborations.

I've just finished reading Draco's, Severus', Helena Ravenclaw's, Dumbledore's, and George Weasley's chapters. So you'll excuse me for not giving an actual, long and logical critique. Yes, I read others too--the NG kids are done pretty passably real, btw. But I thought I was finally going to lose it when I read George's. In all actuality Draco's was the most tragically-tearing--the way his doomed innocence was transcribed in a mere ten points--but I was more prepared for it.

Very, very good job on Severus though. I would've never thought about him going along the vein of "why-is-her-eyes-on-my-arch-rival's-face?!". Very obvious and convincing, afterwards.

And even though I'm sure we all knew why he wanted to see Harry's eyes by the end of DH, the way you used to top off his desperately unfulfilled life made it so much more than just 'looking at Lily's eyes that are not really Lily's but let's just pretend till I've kicked the bucket'.

Again, a really, really good job. Hats off to you.

Er. By the way, why is this under "Lily Evans P. and Scorpius M."? Random, but pretty funny.

I love this story, and the first chapters on the main/semi-main characters made me cry.

i dont get this part of of number 5 on chapter one.
"She’d hesitated for a moment, and then smiled and told him Ron wouldn't have been able to cope. He didn’t really understand that until much later."

The chapter from George’s pov is so touching. It is beautifully written. It made me cry because it is just so sweet.

Wow. So, you're a good updater. ;)

this was great!really amazing and sweet and funny

I've just realised that, in the summary, you've written that you 'enjoyed reading them so you thought you'd try your own' - enjoyed reading what exactly?

You should do a sequel where the Dursley kids are magical.

hello

After reading Jigsaw Pieces, I figured I would read this one too. Wow! Awesome job! I really love these, especially the ones for the Marauders. Great fic!

I swear, parts of this entire story made me want and did cry!

I am really impressed. I actually thought it could have been written by Rowling herself...I was gladly surprised by all the insightful details and the realistic and moving way in which you portray family relationships...Congratulations!