aww poor Esme, But you are right she would have bitten someone once. I mean she can't be that perfect. You should one of Carlisle.

Amazing. Abosolutley amazing.

Oh...

Rosalie did say her own record was cleaner than Esme's. I always wondered, with Esme's sweet nature, how could that be. This story shows us the draw, the compulsion, that blood has on even those charitably-inclined.

This is really good

Amazingly written. I love the concept, and you made it really believable. ]

Amazing. The complexity of Carlisle and Esme have been captured in your last 20 sentences.

I felt so sad reading this, but I love how Carlisle comforted her. :) Would it be too much to ask for one more chapter...I hate sad endings...

This was powerfully written. Although I don't like to picture Esme this way, she is a vampire. It was beautiful.

Very well-written. I've seen an Esme story like this, and it's beautiful.

good chap