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Guest 7/19/11 . chapter 1 Wunderbar mein freund! I loved it! |
The Mad Maiden 2/17/09 . chapter 1I like the way you portrayed GLaDOS. Very in character, it was interesting to read this fic. I'm adding this to my favorites. :D |
65 12/14/08 . chapter 1 Great story. By the way, there an official "Portal" catagory now. You might want to move your story there. |
joshua alton 10/19/08 . chapter 1 i like it, in layman's terms- GLaDOS is afriad of the dark I could just imagine her saying that... :) |
Charlett 9/28/08 . chapter 1Huh, what an interesting turn of events. I always wondered though if the Combine ever attacked Aperture Science. Was the security too great for them? Perhaps GLaDOS set off the nerve gas to combat the aliens and took down the Humans along with it? But then who installed her morality core? Oh, so many questions left unsolved! That's my biggest crit here. It seems like you just put in one little aspect of GLaDOS when you could use her more. I understand if you wanted to keep her mysterious, but I really think it might be better to add a little to her. Thanks for the nice read! I'm glad I came upon this fiction, even if I did so a little late. D Anyway, keep up the good work! -Charlett |
Andrew Joshua Talon 7/16/08 . chapter 1Nicely done. Very creepy and totally in-character for GLaDOS. |
reaper 3/18/08 . chapter 1 interesting. It seems GlaDOS finaly got her taste of fear. pretty good! |
bradwitch 2/16/08 . chapter 1sounds like the groundwork for a sequel |
gryphonworks 2/9/08 . chapter 1 I DEMAND MOAR PORTAL- Anyway I absolutely love your writing style. Couple that with the fact that I'm obsessively fond of GLaDOS myself, and that leaves me no reason to not stalk you on this site for more Portal-stories. :B Oh boy... (Keep up the awesome work!) |
richard9311 2/5/08 . chapter 1Very good fanfic. I feel you caught GLADOS's personality perfectly. |
Kiefer I 2/4/08 . chapter 1Very nice! It was really well written. I liked this alot. It gave GLaDos real personality. |
SilentSniper 2/3/08 . chapter 1When I played Portal, I had the feeling that GLaDOS was prone to feelings of 'fear of not knowing', so naturally, I was really glad when I found your fic. Uck. Headcrabs. Uck. Cute when they're on fire, though. The Companion Cube isn't exactly the most talkative of friends. Lawl. |
PokehTurtle 2/3/08 . chapter 1Awesome story. It's interesting to think of how GLaDOS would react to the combine invasion. |
kosmokomik 2/3/08 . chapter 1This was quite brilliant. |