i just read and reviewed your "Troy" story sorry, can't remember the title at this precise moment, and thought I'd give your other stories a whirl. I have to say, you didn't disappoint. I was prepared for cringe-worthiness when I took in the obvious typos on some of your summaries(Angels'?) but this really perked me up. I love this, I think you've really captured Cordelia and made her a sympathetic character. The final, abrupt, "Betting on not." is simply superb. You're really good at those soul-satisfying endings. The modern brash tone of the Cordelia we know juxtaposed with an older, more melancholy touch. Case in point"Ones I wasted, I guess. When he leaves I will forget how to smile this way."

Wow. That was good. Depressing, but really good.

Hehe, great work! You're an awesome writer. Cool story(told you i'd write you some reviews, hehe)

That was beautiful. You wrote a lot in a little space, but it didn't feel rushed. While this isn't something we can expect to see on the show, this is realistic to the characters, and that's always important. Keep it up, I look forward to reading more from you.

Poor Cordy, always second to someone.