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| Nikkitty101 2008-03-17 ch 1,  | abuseit is awesome!! |
| badgurl102 2008-03-16 ch 3, | abuseplease countinue!! |
| cheeklychee 2008-03-12 ch 3, anon. | abuseawesome story xxlolxx |
| CinderpoolANDMoonfire 2008-03-07 ch 3, | abuseOh my poor Piper. I imgain cyclonia as a place where people pull pranks all the time. They get each other mad. They just act all tough on the outside. But your idea is much more likely. |
| alice the dark angel 2008-03-05 ch 1, anon. | abusehi that is really good and i think that you are a really good writer but i think you should update quite quickly as you may loose your readers hope you take the advice Alice |
| soldier4Christ 2008-03-03 ch 3, | abuseYes! Finally, someone else who's also a Dark Ace/Ravess shipper. That moment in "The Lesson," totally agree. Oh, yeah. I like your story. And I feel bad for Piper. |
| phantomgirl113 2008-03-03 ch 3, | abuseYou write a very entertain fic, please write more to it. You know you don’t see to many DA/Ravess parings and it is such a good paring too. |
| CinderpoolANDMoonfire 2008-02-27 ch 2, | abuseMe: YOU HURT PIPER!! Dark Ace: You mean thats Piper of the Storm hawks?! Me: (Pulls out Bazooka) Dark Ace: What are you planning to do with that Me: Alvasta a bye bye baybe Dark Ace : Shi... |
| Sleipnnir28forever 2008-02-25 ch 2, anon. | abuseYour story is totally cool ! Don't stop it ... I wait for the next chapter ... ^^ |
| alice the dark angel 2008-02-23 ch 2, anon. | abusegood but i think that you should update more. It's a really good plot though. Please update as soon as possible. Alice |
| The Fallen One 2008-02-21 ch 2, anon. | abuseWow, this is awesome. Poor Piper. Please update soon. |
| horribly random 2008-02-18 ch 2, | abusehow dd I miss this before? I dunno, but I really liked it, and I can't wait for an update! Random |
| alice the dark angel 2008-02-12 ch 1, anon. | abusegood i like the idea alot and i think that you write well, you should continue when you get the chance as i can't wait for the next chapter. alice |
| I'vebecomesonumb 2008-02-06 ch 1, | abuseMe: Seems interesting...*evil grin* Melokoyla: *sigh* here she goes again... Me: *rolls eyes* Anywhoz, Nice story. The mark of Cyclonia thing is freaky, though. Ok, please continue! |
| CinderpoolANDMoonfire 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseSeems good! I love the plot! (Well I love most plots) Will Carmen find out who "Andrea" really is? How will she react? Just trying to spark some ideas. |