I knew Nurse Lisa would be into the bondage and discipline. Now vengeance demons, I wonder if they are similer to the wish-granting demons in Buffy and if so what in the name of the name did Ted wish for?

Love Mephistopheles in all the literature hope we see more of him. The twists and turns of your story keep me hooked.

Hooray for updates. Appreciate your hard work. I was so happy when the new chapter alert appeared in my E-Mail. Waiting’s a buggar!

o0o0o0o0o0o0o, a vengeance demon, eh? Ah, the updates are too far apart... :(

Love the update though~ Don't leave us hangin' too long now! :D

I just finished your story last night and probably like a lot of other people am completely and helplessly hooked on it. The dynamic your creating within the devils family and the growing list of mysteries you add every chapter has me in suspense and has definitely made this my favorite reaper fan fiction. I eagerly await the next chapter and the introduction of the season two characters!

Yea, happy you used my ideas and thrilled to know the Devil is a fan of chocolate chip. That information may come useful one of these days.

Loved your action sequence and the whole thing with the two Rachels, great dilemma. Really like the discription of Rachel's dad, I suspect that he may turn out to be a pretty powerful demon.

Really fun chapter.

Ah! I love it pls update soon =)

gah! this story just keeps getting better... cant wait to read more... btw im stoked for the season finale of reaper... i cant wait to see the competition between Sam and the Reaper

Hmn with the Devil and all his little minions spending so much time in the Work Bench it may soon qualify for genuine 'Hell on Earth' status and Sam wouldn't need to send all his lunches at the DMV.

Ways to celebrate your twentieth chapter... Sing along with Sympathy for the Devil at full volume into your hairbrush doing your best Jagger impression... bake cookies and offer them in sacrifice to the Prince of Darkness... movie night with your favourite versions of His Dark Majesty (I mean apart from RAY Wise) have an extra setting of snacks put aside. Anyway enjoy.

Love your creepy twins, even scarier than Wrath in their way.

Plot grows thicker, who may responsible for Rachel's aduduction one of the sisters? Which one and why?

Ways to celebrate twenty chapters... play 'Sympathy for the Devil' at top volume while doing your best Jagger impression... bake cookies and sacrifice them to the Prince of Darkness... movie night with your favourite version of the Devil (you know apart from Ray Wise) and have an extra drink and bowl of snacks set aside just incase he shows up. It's up to you.

Love the phrase 'swoonig spawns of Satan' sort of infernal beatlemania.

Excellent update. Very in tune with what you have done. Also very funny, to see the boys forced to visit Ted. Poor Sam he just can't win. Great plot. great flow. and over all just a fun read.

"The possibility of there being an evil soul sucking demon waiting inside Ted’s room." Okay it's a obviouse joke but don't you mean "an evil soul sucking demon, apart from Ted, waiting inside Ted’s room?"

Did you notice that you're the first person to write or update a Reaper story in three weeks? It's as if as soon a Underbelly aired we all went into creative shock. Weird but I'm glad you were the one to break the jinx.

Nurse Lisa seems interesting in a leather and spiked heels kind of way. Looking forward to finding out who she is. Maybe one of the Seven Virtues? Possibly Obedience?

what does the devil have planned?!?!
this is really really good. a lot of good ideas. i love the descriptions of the sins - especially wrath! they're exactly as i would imagine them to be, though i never actually have imagined them... i leave that to the experts! is david actually double? and why is double called double? and if david is double why is he being wierdly sort-of nice to sam? and why is double a secret? (sorry you can't reply 'cause i'm not a member but i can't stop wondering about double and his agenda. i can't help but thing he has a bigger part in this story than what has been shown)please update IMMEDIATELY. i MUST know what is happening!

Wow I love this story all of the Devil's children seen really great and original. I feel so bad for Double it can't be easy working to inherit the family business from a father who's imortal.

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They seem so kool! I want to know why Sam's really there! Toil and Trouble seem awesome. 'Specially awesome when I think of Double. LoLz. Is Lucifer a fan of Shakespeare?

Good Job! I can't wait for the next UPDATE! d-(^__~)z

P.S. You know my dorky self thought David was Sam's younger brother for a second? LoL.

Agh! It took me forever to finish this chapter... lol. So many interruptions! But omgosh, I was like, "Justice?" Lmfao. No one (well at least not I) ever remembers the Virtues... this story keeps goin' deeper and deeper into stuff I never woulda guessed! Good job! I can't wait for the next chapter! xD

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