 OnyxRiver 2008-08-06 . chapter 21Ok...I'm finally reviewing! I read it the night it came out, but was too sleepy to create anything intelligable. LOL
Anyway, great addition! I LOVED the way Izzy kept Sylar from killing Maury! When he gets the desire to kill he pukes his guts out! HEH! Poor baby!
I don't know how you did it, but I felt some sympathy toward Maury. I still think he's a deadbeat dad and a sleazbag, but I felt a twinge of sorrow for the man. I enjoyed the talk between Matt and Maury. VERY interesting backstory/history about Maury, Bob and Victoria. Very enlightening! Now do we trust him, or is he playing Matt again!
And Linderman is alive and well! Dang!
Ok, so this Sophie chick just creeps me out! And she is in cahoots with Linderman? Why don't I like the way it sounds when they talk about Adam's daughter? Why do I have a bad feeling about this?
And now the Pratt sisters are gonna talk!
Great story sweetie! Can't wait to read more! |
 Red Vector 2008-08-03 . chapter 21Great addition. I never thought I would say this but you actually almost made me feel sorry for Maury. And if Bob doesn't think that Matt wasn't evesdropping on Maury and his conversation he's not only evil he's an idiot.
The icing on the cake is Linderman still being alive. I could see it playing out that way on the show. |
 Synch 2008-08-02 . chapter 21Excellent
Linderman's returned...this is going to end badly, I'm afraid. HE's always been a step ahead...
And Maury's not quite the same level of slime we thought? Or is there more to this story as well?
Wonderful addition. Can't wait for more. |
 OnyxRiver 2008-07-27 . chapter 20Well hopefully the review gods will smile upon me again...
Damn! That ws one heart-pounding chapter! The rooftop meeting was very well done. Damn, even Elle wants Bob dead! Can't say I blame her after all he has done to her. Asshole!
The Izzy/Sylar stuff was OUTSTANING! Chilling...humorous and just downright creepy! And I LOVED the way he kept repremanding her about her language...Too damn funny!
And the ending with Maury waking up! The nightmare man is awake! YIKES!
Great chapter girl! Update soon! |
 OnyxRiver 2008-07-25 . chapter 19YES! I can review again! WOOT!
Loved this chapter! The conversation between the twins was outstanding and very realistic. But sorry Jus...you can wer red all the way down to your tippy toes and get Nate into bed, but you are going to be thinking of somebody else sweetie!
I LOVE KIT! This is going to be a very interesting character addition to this story! I can't wait to see how he interacts with the rest of the heroes! Interesting power too. That could come in quite handy if you know what I mean. HE!
And here with have Sylar trying to be the bigger person...well THAT didn't last too long, did it?
What a combination of folks for dinner! Getting invisible to sneak into a movie theater? Hell at 9 bucks a movie sounds awfully good! They just need to bring The Haitian to help them steal some popcorn and sodas and he can erase their memories.
And Angela is an Astral Projector! Love it!
This meeting outta be good!
Off to read/review the next chapter! Great job!
See you in the next review! |
 OnyxRiver 2008-07-25 . chapter 18Ok...lets see if FF is going to let me do a review!
EXCELLENT chapter! Loved the backstory about Roger. I am looking forward to him making an appearance.
Sylar gets left out in he cold on his plane ride back east. Poor baby!
I was LMFAO at Mir ripping out Peter's beating heart holding it in her hand in front of his face! And the thought of her ripping out a body part everytime she walks past him...PRICELESS! LOVED IT!
And now Jus has dumped Sylar for Nathan...ok...good second choice, but the staunch politician just isn't going to do it for you honey! Go back to that tall drink of yummy water!
Great chapter kiddo! LOVED It...
Ok...now is it goign to let me review? |
 Red Vector 2008-07-21 . chapter 20Awesome chapter with cool twist at the end. I had a feeling that Daddy Demonic would be making an appearance. I'm sure this will throw Noah's plan out of whack or put it on hold if they have to deal with Maury. |
 Synch 2008-07-19 . chapter 20Holy ...
Izzie's got a bit of a cruel streak, doesn't she...
Justine's trying to make Gabe jealous, I assume?
And...Sylar just f'd up and released the big baddy...
Damn... more soon? Please? |
 Red Vector 2008-07-15 . chapter 1Another great installment. I get the feeling that Miriam's going to use Molly power to locate Kit and teleport him back to the States. |
 Synch 2008-07-12 . chapter 19"Rooftop Meeting" indeed... more accurate than most of my own chapter titles.
Thrilled you're updating this one again. I've missed this group
So...Angela has a...what? Astral Projection? Awesome! I love this one.
Jus thinks she's going to be happy with Nathan and not Sylar? Somehow I don't see that lasting...
Mir's the good girl right now? Wasn't expecting that one...
And...when the frack are they going to realize that Sylar is having an attitude adjustment at the hands of their little sister? I mean...it's not like either of them are stupid. |
 Synch 2008-05-19 . chapter 18Damn.
This may have been mostly groundwork for the next chapters...but it was damn good groundwork.
I loved every minute of this chapter. Keep iup the good work. |
 OnyxRiver 2008-05-16 . chapter 17Well it's about time you got this up! I was having serious withdrawls! I kid!
What a roller coaster chapter! My heart was breaking for Elle and Izzy in their realization of everything that happened.
Loved the meeting of the minds about their plans for Bob! Take that bald piece of shit down NOW!
Oh common Jus! Your loins pound for that man and you know it! It sounds like you have gotten to him too! I really do love this pairing!
I am loving Sylar and Matt as brothers! It sounds like they are bonding nicely! Very cool!
Oh hello! And now Sophie has been added to the mix! I am looking forward to seeing where this is going!
WHOA! Uncle Roger! Dang! Didn't see that coming! Well, yes I did but only because I guessed and and you told me. LOL
Fantastic chapter girl! Glad to see you back at it! Love ya!
Onyx |
 Red Vector 2008-05-16 . chapter 17Very cool chapter with lots of angst. I get the feeling that Elle may have the best idea of dealing with Bob. With him stripped of his abilities his usefulness to the Company would be at end, and so would his life.
The scene with Matt, Syler, and Noah was funny.
And this Sophie chick is spooky as hell. |
 Synch 2008-05-16 . chapter 17Damn...
This chapter had it all...
Bob's in it deep... |
 OnyxRiver 2008-04-13 . chapter 16GOOD LORD! What a chapter! That was the best one to date! Very eye opening!
I REALLY wanted to reach through the pages and slash Bob with a machetti! OH he is SO dispicable! I say let everybody involved in teh story line up and bitch slap him first, then let Sylar have his way with him! SLIME!
What he did to Elle was just heartbreaking! He has no idea what he did to Izzy! In doing to her what he did he only made her a force to be reconed with! I take that back...don't let Sylar have his way with him...let Izzy bring it on!
Well, I would say that Sylar is misunderstood, but seriously! Has he ever given anybody a REASON to trust him? But for once, he does seem to have a point...he didn't know Miriam knew Adam's warabouts until AFTER he did Justine. Common Jus...give the boy a chance!
And I am still reeling from what he did to Izzy! DAMN! I did NOT see that coming!! ASSHOLE!
Best chapter yet kiddo! Update REAL soon! |