|Reviews for Year Two of Forever|
| Objective 9/17/09 . chapter 67
Well, I can't say I'm completely surprised at the ending (Bella was just a bit too happy through most of the first two "years"), but it was satisfactorily concluded as a story.
A minor point I would like to make on story structure: frame tales are difficult, as most writers fail to differentiate the two parallel plots. Normally the internal plot has difficulty with closure, since the external plot rarely concludes. This story is actually a success, and I applaud you for it.
| Objective 9/16/09 . chapter 18
I'd just like to comment on your use of the word "seconds" as defining a time-interval: even in human combat, the shift from engagement to deathblow can be less than two seconds. At vampiric speeds? Well, suffice it to say that entire battles can be fought in "seconds."
| MentallyDazzled 9/13/09 . chapter 3
YAY! x x
| angelburt84 9/11/09 . chapter 67
I loved all three stories you are a very good writer. The end threw me for a loop i give you that but very well writen and thank you for the story.
| joayla 8/29/09 . chapter 67
When I read the last chapter of this story i felt deflated that you could end it like that. However i can see why you did it. This way you now can write it all over again her true fairytale ending that Bella and Edward deserve.
i am now going to crack on reading your new story and hope that there ending is truly happy there are so many options open to you and i hope this story touches me the way your others have.
also loving your funny one shots keep up the good work !
| TwiSagaAddict 8/24/09 . chapter 66
I enjoyed the trilogy except the ending...I now feel that I've waste many late nights reading this.
| Lissabeth Caine 8/21/09 . chapter 42
when they start the game it say " Bella jumped, her brown eyes growing wide." isn't she a vampire ? Anyways awsome story !
| nokie1998 8/20/09 . chapter 65
I finished your story today. I have to say you are an amazing writer. I read the reviews for this story last night and I was on like chapter 42. I will be honest in saying I was really disapointed to know that it was all a dream, I almost didn't finish the story. Then decided that in order for me to review something I have to follow through with the whole story. I am very impressed. I don't think it was at all a disapointment on how you ended it. I think now Bella will be a different person cause she felt the love that they always had and dreamed her perfect dream. I can't begin to tell you how much I enjoyed reading these stories. Although I would have made Bella put Edward in his place more, but that is why you are the talented writer. Great job on these. I can't wait to read more from you. Don't listen to what others say about how you ended it. I think it is great and I know that there are other fans out there that will feel the same. Keep up the good work!
| Noble Korhedron 8/14/09 . chapter 64
Did anyone ever tell you you have a fucking sick J.R complex? This Ch. has ruined a perfectly good story as far as I'm concerned...! :( Coma - HUH! :( C-.
| shaqbarcalis 8/5/09 . chapter 64
YOU ARE BRILLIANT!Where do I start? You have the love scenes down pat WOW is all I can say perfect! I never laughed so hard while reading EVER (when Emmett is telling his story around the campfire LMAO)AWESOME! And lastly I could not stop reading it until the very last word and then I wanted MORE MORE MORE LOL! Thank you for a very awesome reading experience! If you publish a book I will be one of the first people to be reading it. (just as good as S.M if not better with the love scenes). Just one tip write longer chapters PLEASE.
| Fleur24 8/4/09 . chapter 56
I loved how Carlisle and Esme joined in on the snowball fight and the others rolling down the hill.
| Fleur24 8/3/09 . chapter 45
That was bso totally awesonme! i LOVE HOW bELLA AND jASPER HUNG OUT TOGETHER
| Fleur24 8/3/09 . chapter 43
AW! Thjat was so sweet and touching! You are a really good writer!
| Noble Korhedron 8/3/09 . chapter 1
O.K - STOP APOLOGISING! :) A Ch. a day is fucking prolific, if not phenomenal! :) B for this one, BTW. I think I already marked the story overall, if not have an A! :)
| Fleur24 8/3/09 . chapter 41
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOU STORY SO FAR! Emmett had me laughing uncontrollably! "I screamed and jumped as Edward chuckled and held me even tighter. Emmett had hopped into Rosalie’s lap and she was laughing hysterically while he was trying to cling to her. Alice was rolling around on the ground, pointing and laughing at Emmett." Emmett, Emmett, emmett.