 spannieren 2009-09-11 . chapter 19great story :) |
 Dark-Goth101 2009-07-26 . chapter 18This was good, can't wait for sequel. |
 Jessie-Heart Breaks Happen 2009-04-20 . chapter 18YAY! YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY HEHE omc is so awesome i L-O-V-E HOLLY she s so adorable hehe yay cant wait for the sequel
from jessie |
 ifairyu 2009-01-19 . chapter 18THIS HAS BEEN THE MOST CCUTEST AND ADORABLE STORY I HAVE READ IN AWHILE!
I KNOW THE PERFECT SONG FOR THIS STORY!!
ITS CALLED "THIS IS HOME" BY SWITCHFOOT! CHECK IT OUT! |
 ifairyu 2009-01-19 . chapter 13wow..i thought rosalie would teach her about cars and alice do the modeling thing..oh well.. |
 Twilightxfanatic21 2008-12-19 . chapter 17luv it. |
 topazgirl14 2008-12-04 . chapter 12This chapter was really cute |
 AtlantisCat101 2008-11-20 . chapter 18this has got to be one of the best stories on fanfiction!
LOVE THIS! |
 Morally Questioned 2008-08-19 . chapter 19Oh no! Last chapter?!?!? Oh gosh! Oh no...will you write the one-shots from ages 7-13, pretty pretty pretty pretty please? I'll give you lots and lots and lots of cookies! Thanks for writing, though, I loved this story so much and I always reread it :) |
 Katsumi-ritsu-kun 2008-07-26 . chapter 19Lovely story, I was a bit sad when Jacob left because i liked him as much as i liked Edward. I wonder if they will change Holly or tell her that Edward is her great great great great great great uncle. Another thing that got me a little bit surprised was the repetitions of the Masen's family tree names. Very good story, descriptions, and creativity. However there are a few typos but that is about it. You have kept me up to 6:19 AM with this story starting from about 3:00AM so you will be blamed when i pass out today haha. Sorry for only reviewing the last chapter but i don't like stopping in the middle of the story. |
 Black blood666 2008-07-25 . chapter 19when i started reading this, it was so good! but i forgot to put it on favourites and lost it so i was so sad then i found it again and my face would have looked like a five yr old on x mas day! lol
Black blood6 |
 iluvec 2008-07-21 . chapter 19This was one of the best stories I have ever read! I can 't wait 4 the sequal:) |
 annalisemortimer12 2008-07-21 . chapter 19 ohh my gosh ,
i absolutly love this story .
you should ,
like wrrite the sequel like 10 years from when they move to Denali .
about Holly when she's a teenager or something .
it would be crraazy .
but anyways ,
PLEASE KEEP GOING !
you rockk = ]
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 cem1818 2008-07-20 . chapter 19aww holly is so cute! i cant wait for a sequal! |
 Khlarka2 2008-07-20 . chapter 19great story :D i cant wait for the sequel! |