great story :)

This was good, can't wait for sequel.

YAY! YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY YAY HEHE omc is so awesome i L-O-V-E HOLLY she s so adorable hehe yay cant wait for the sequel
from jessie

THIS HAS BEEN THE MOST CCUTEST AND ADORABLE STORY I HAVE READ IN AWHILE!

I KNOW THE PERFECT SONG FOR THIS STORY!!

ITS CALLED "THIS IS HOME" BY SWITCHFOOT! CHECK IT OUT!

wow..i thought rosalie would teach her about cars and alice do the modeling thing..oh well..

luv it.

This chapter was really cute

this has got to be one of the best stories on fanfiction!


LOVE THIS!

Oh no! Last chapter?!?!? Oh gosh! Oh no...will you write the one-shots from ages 7-13, pretty pretty pretty pretty please? I'll give you lots and lots and lots of cookies! Thanks for writing, though, I loved this story so much and I always reread it :)

Lovely story, I was a bit sad when Jacob left because i liked him as much as i liked Edward. I wonder if they will change Holly or tell her that Edward is her great great great great great great uncle. Another thing that got me a little bit surprised was the repetitions of the Masen's family tree names. Very good story, descriptions, and creativity. However there are a few typos but that is about it. You have kept me up to 6:19 AM with this story starting from about 3:00AM so you will be blamed when i pass out today haha. Sorry for only reviewing the last chapter but i don't like stopping in the middle of the story.

when i started reading this, it was so good! but i forgot to put it on favourites and lost it so i was so sad then i found it again and my face would have looked like a five yr old on x mas day! lol

Black blood6

This was one of the best stories I have ever read! I can 't wait 4 the sequal:)

ohh my gosh ,
i absolutly love this story .
you should ,
like wrrite the sequel like 10 years from when they move to Denali .
about Holly when she's a teenager or something .
it would be crraazy .
but anyways ,
PLEASE KEEP GOING !
you rockk = ]
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aww holly is so cute! i cant wait for a sequal!

great story :D i cant wait for the sequel!