This is pretty cool. A bit confusing, but still cool.

:D:

Woah. You like to go through the scenes fast, don't you?
Heh. I like it.

I'm enjoying this so far; Lena is a good character right now. I loved the wolf based description here; not your regular SI.

Sorry, I don't have much to say because it's 1 AM in the morning here. I'll see you next chapter, then.

I really enjoy a well written SI.
That being said, while the fighting WAS a bit confusing and hard to follow, it would make sense due to the way it's being written, so...
I like Lena's character. Hopefully she can stay consistent with herself.

Well, seeing how this will make you write more, and I want to see more writen, i will say that this story is fn awsome! please update as soon as possible. Also I give you a random gift of a random new weapon for a random character!

Hdshbsag, Insane Man Who No One Knows.

I really like your beginning and the SI is very original. You've got a nice writing style too. All in, in all, this doesn't look too shabby. I hope to see a new chapter soon! :D

Inky

P.S: Colette doesn't get her wings 'till the Seal of Fire.

Heh i like this. its different from the normal SI stories thats for sure. i'm gonna take a guess and say she was electrocuted when she died right? yay for your Tifaness, she's awesome. please update soon.

I loved this chapter, I literally can't wait for the next one to come out, I can understand the half-elf thing and the getting crap about being even part black since I am black myself but as to not get off topic here's what I thought of the story: loved how you set up the crossover into the Symphonia world, makes me want to do something similar with this Tales of the Abyss fanfic I had planned. I liked how Lena thought Kratos was an ass, honestly I do too at times even if he does have Lightspear Cannon...lucky bastard. As for her fighting style, would Regal and Lena be able to share some common ground in this regard? I know I'm just really spinning tires here but I'm just saying what honestly comes to mind. Bottom line though I'm very interested in this story and I'd like to see more and if possible help you get more of it out.