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Rhr4eva
2009-09-07 . chapter 17
Hello,

Wait, you're a guy?? Woah! That's so weird! Sorry, I didn't think that haha...

Wow... Hmm... I didn't like that ending. I really didn't. It was much too abrupt. And too half-happy, half-angsty. I just didn't like it. Urgh. It just didn't match with the mood of the rest of the story.

And seriouly. Kelly? Would they really name their child Kelly? Haha sorry had to add that.

Great work

Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-07 . chapter 16
Hello,

Well, that was cheerful.

Great work

Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-07 . chapter 15
Hello,

Yess! It worked! Harry totally attacking Hermione broke her out of whatever it was holding her! Haha cool!

Great work

Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-07 . chapter 14
Hello,

Urghh...

Great work

Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-06 . chapter 13
Hello,

Wow... more Ginny related than I hoped. So... that's the ned of Harry/Ginny, huh? I really can't believe they can make it past this... And, frankly, I'm not sure if Ginny wants to. But really, Ginny deserves better than Malfoy. She deserves to be treated fairly, and not like some toy you can throw around. Urghh!

Great work

Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-06 . chapter 12
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Urgh I knew it. This is going to be a bit Draco/Ginny now right? Urgh... if it must be, hopefully it will only be on Draco's part, not Ginny's.

Great work

Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-06 . chapter 11
Hello,

Urgh!

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Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-06 . chapter 10
Hello,

Yay! I knew you wouldn't kill her off :) Perfect. I loved it :) Except Hermione is such a friggen drama queen! "You… you promised… you promised you would be there… in the morning," I mean seriously! He was too busy being attacked by three random men set on killing him! All because of her! She shouldn't be so freakin selfish. God.

Great work

Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-06 . chapter 9
Hello,

Ture, Hermione doesn't have much innocence.

I don't think you will kill Hermione off. At least not yet.

Great work

Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-06 . chapter 8
OH GOD!! NO TIME FOR "HELLO". YOU ALMOST HAD HERMIONE KIL RON!! WHAT THE HECK? SERIOUSLY? WHAT'S YOUR PROBLEM??/ AH!

If I wasn't a huge fan of yours I would be a whole lot angrier...you should be happy.

Evil work!

Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-06 . chapter 7
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Urgh!! He is so creepy! "I hope you and your husband’s brother enjoy your night…" *shivers*

Great work

Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-06 . chapter 6
hello,

Omg that's scary! "He also wrote that he knew she was reading this aloud and advised against it." Urghh this is like that other story... the other letter. That guy said something about that too, didn't he?

Great work

Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-06 . chapter 5
Hello,

Urgh! Who is he?

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Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-06 . chapter 4
Hello,

Urgh!

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Rhr4eva
Rhr4eva
2009-09-06 . chapter 3
Hello,

Aww :) Haha I like your AN. All it was was: Ah, young love. :)

Great work

Rhr4eva
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