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| LadyWriter29 2008-07-01 ch 7,  | abuseI really liked your story. I was hoping it would have been a little longer and just a tad bit more info. Thanks for the great read. |
| SLITH 2008-06-24 ch 7, | abusePretty good chapter, the bloody well creep I'd pound his lights in. However I noticed one thing in the chapter and that is you kept putting in 'no' when it should have been 'know'. Thats all. Lookin' forward to the next post. SLITH |
| need-courage-to-write 2008-06-23 ch 7, | abuseis that it? aw man i need more i mean john is still out there and i want more morgan and JJ stuff lol ok i'll stop being so demnding now and actually review. Good chap and good story but you always ahve alot of typos {like me} but it can be very distracting eg: you use "no" instead of "know" alot and there are others you should spell check and reread your work more but it is an easy thing to fix/improve. otherwise good work! |
| nic.heart.FF 2008-05-06 ch 6, | abusehi i love your story. it is really good!! i cant wait for more so please please please update really soon!! thanks for writing this, keep up the good work! |
| JJ-Reid-01 2008-04-28 ch 6, | abusePlease do some more asap I love this story so much |
| SLITH 2008-04-27 ch 6, | abuseWow - intense and sweet. Nicely written. I loved how Morgan carried her up to bed, that he slept with her for a bit. SLITH |
| Jommy23 2008-04-03 ch 5, | abuseLove it! There is so much chemistry between JJ and Morgan and I want them tog et together on the show! |
| Television-Fanatic 2008-03-30 ch 5, | abuseAmazing Story! Please update soon! |
| CybrAngl 2008-03-13 ch 5, | abuseI would love to see a chapter with Morgan/JJ interaction. Would also love to see them explain to their team why they kept their relationship a secret |
| SLITH 2008-03-12 ch 5, | abuseI did see occasional mistakes here and there but ignored them. I'd like to see of what happens when Morgan gets to JJ, how she explains it all to him and what he'll do. I know he'll be fuming once he knows about her condition in kicking kicked and slapped around. Pretty good chapter - I enjoyed it ^_^ SLITH |
| need-courage-to-write 2008-03-12 ch 5, | abuseno def need one more chap at leats fo morgan and jj reunited there was quite a few speeling mistakes but no worries we all have chapters like that very good i've been meaning to review for a while so finally am woohoo loved the story |
| ReidsLuvr93 2008-03-11 ch 5, | abuseMORE MORE MORE! I want to see Morgan's reaction when he sees her! KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK AND UPDATE SOON! |
| egoofy34 2008-03-11 ch 5, | abuseYOu should definitely write at least one more chapter. Morgan has to come get her! Please continue. |
| JJ-Reid-01 2008-03-11 ch 5, | abusePoor JJ Please do more soon |
| SLITH 2008-03-08 ch 4, | abuseHm first person to come to my mind is the detective she hit it off with in the episode Jone. I think if he suddenly popped up she'd be shocked to see him... but it can't be as he'd never harm her. Even though it was short I still enjoyed the update ^_^ SLITH |