 Xx-Flesh Carnival-xX 2009-10-27 . chapter 4hope u keep ploading more of this story i love it:Dhope u keep ploading more of this story i love it:D |
 Eager Beaver 2009-10-09 . chapter 5 This is a really great story. I think you have done a great job of keeping Shizuru and Natsuki in character, and the kids are so cute, especially how Aya has the same reactions you would expect from Shizuru... it's really great. Please update soon. |
 Xx-Flesh Carnival-xX 2009-09-07 . chapter 5oh plz plz i wish u would really finish this story i'm so excited to read more of it n to know wat hapends...hope u finish it all son :D |
 SulliMike23 2009-05-28 . chapter 1After reading through this, I gotta say I'm very impressed. You definitely kept Shizuru and Natsuki in character despite the fact that they both have kids. In fact, I can actually picture them both having children (through a different means besides sex of course). I even like the kids; in a way they're both like their mothers with Kouta being a tease and Aya having a tomboy attitude. I just wish you didn't stop writing this. |
 laynie 2009-05-21 . chapter 5 this story is really intresting. i truly do love it please update! |
 Graceful Amethyst 2009-05-06 . chapter 5I shall Ninja Bump this fic just because it's so f*cking awesome! I can't believe I missed it, and happened to found it as I was browsing for some old fics...
It's so perfect and original! I think Natsuki and Shizuru would make such wonderful mothers and while there are a few fics about it, there should be more! And all of them should be as good as this one is!
I absolutely adore fluff and romance, and this has it all, even humor.
Now, I could go on and on (believe me) about how great this fic is, the details, characterization, plot and writing, etc etc. But I shall make this short...
Please continue soon if you can? This is definitely too good a fic to let it sit by unattended... I would definitely enjoy reading more as the story and their relationship progresses.
Again, please update soon :) It would definitely make my day xD We need more updates!
so..
uPd4Te s00nz!1!! pL3aS3??!?!/1
That is all.
(lol) |
 xEvilAngel56x 2009-02-10 . chapter 5This is fantastic I'm a huge fan of Shiznat and this is one of my favsx It is so dreamy and hypnotic and Shizuru having a son I like that it suits her well. Congrats on the marridge btwx
But please could you consider doing another chap this story is f* fantastic and the kids are so cute and Shiznat for that fact, hope you do another chappie Jx |
 firstclasstroublemaker 2008-12-18 . chapter 3Seems OCC but i like it. Nice chapter i'll keep reading... and i take back the reito fujino offspring back... obviously that is not happening here. |
 firstclasstroublemaker 2008-12-18 . chapter 2Nice second chapter, I can't help but resemble aya to my miyuki ( not my daugther, it's from my story) and kouta is a nice boy. they'd make a nice couple, as friends I mean. lol wondering who kouta's father is... reito perhaps... or someone else lol i dunno but nice chapter. |
 firstclasstroublemaker 2008-12-18 . chapter 1masashi takeda... wow... i need to process this...
LOL great story very different from what most readers are used to. Great first chapter |
 Holly928 2008-10-14 . chapter 5Hey Author are you still going to update soon, pls do I really like this story, it's so cute and funny. Natsuki has a cute daughter and also shizuru's son, to bad nat. & shiz. didn't have their kids together but still like it, so pls update. |
 jquackers 2008-08-16 . chapter 5Aww, I just love this story so much. It's so sweet and fluffy. (:
Can't wait for the next update! |
 Shazu 2008-07-07 . chapter 5this story is beyond adorable X3 its is awesome, i can't wait 'till then next update 8D and shizuru x natsuki's interactions are really cute X33
update soon please 8D |
 MomO 2008-06-11 . chapter 5 I love this fic so much.Please update soon,I'm looking forward to reading. |
 hanazono 2008-06-07 . chapter 5i enjoyed it! ^-^ really awesome fic!
this chapter is funny! Shizuru Nao combo was the best! haha! poor Natsuki, it's too much for he. haha
you authors really have great imagination!
keep it up!
pls update soon! thanks! |