hope u keep ploading more of this story i love it:Dhope u keep ploading more of this story i love it:D

This is a really great story. I think you have done a great job of keeping Shizuru and Natsuki in character, and the kids are so cute, especially how Aya has the same reactions you would expect from Shizuru... it's really great. Please update soon.

oh plz plz i wish u would really finish this story i'm so excited to read more of it n to know wat hapends...hope u finish it all son :D

After reading through this, I gotta say I'm very impressed. You definitely kept Shizuru and Natsuki in character despite the fact that they both have kids. In fact, I can actually picture them both having children (through a different means besides sex of course). I even like the kids; in a way they're both like their mothers with Kouta being a tease and Aya having a tomboy attitude. I just wish you didn't stop writing this.

this story is really intresting. i truly do love it please update!

I shall Ninja Bump this fic just because it's so f*cking awesome! I can't believe I missed it, and happened to found it as I was browsing for some old fics...

It's so perfect and original! I think Natsuki and Shizuru would make such wonderful mothers and while there are a few fics about it, there should be more! And all of them should be as good as this one is!

I absolutely adore fluff and romance, and this has it all, even humor.

Now, I could go on and on (believe me) about how great this fic is, the details, characterization, plot and writing, etc etc. But I shall make this short...

Please continue soon if you can? This is definitely too good a fic to let it sit by unattended... I would definitely enjoy reading more as the story and their relationship progresses.

Again, please update soon :) It would definitely make my day xD We need more updates!

so..

uPd4Te s00nz!1!! pL3aS3??!?!/1

That is all.

(lol)

This is fantastic I'm a huge fan of Shiznat and this is one of my favsx It is so dreamy and hypnotic and Shizuru having a son I like that it suits her well. Congrats on the marridge btwx

But please could you consider doing another chap this story is f* fantastic and the kids are so cute and Shiznat for that fact, hope you do another chappie Jx

Seems OCC but i like it. Nice chapter i'll keep reading... and i take back the reito fujino offspring back... obviously that is not happening here.

Nice second chapter, I can't help but resemble aya to my miyuki ( not my daugther, it's from my story) and kouta is a nice boy. they'd make a nice couple, as friends I mean. lol wondering who kouta's father is... reito perhaps... or someone else lol i dunno but nice chapter.

masashi takeda... wow... i need to process this...
LOL great story very different from what most readers are used to. Great first chapter

Hey Author are you still going to update soon, pls do I really like this story, it's so cute and funny. Natsuki has a cute daughter and also shizuru's son, to bad nat. & shiz. didn't have their kids together but still like it, so pls update.

Aww, I just love this story so much. It's so sweet and fluffy. (:
Can't wait for the next update!

this story is beyond adorable X3 its is awesome, i can't wait 'till then next update 8D and shizuru x natsuki's interactions are really cute X33

update soon please 8D

I love this fic so much.Please update soon,I'm looking forward to reading.

i enjoyed it! ^-^ really awesome fic!

this chapter is funny! Shizuru Nao combo was the best! haha! poor Natsuki, it's too much for he. haha

you authors really have great imagination!
keep it up!
pls update soon! thanks!