The is awesomeness. I loved the underlying dark tones of corruption, yet you also kept him in character...though it could just be me hoping for a sense of twistedness within him, yet it is sure- I am inspired by your short but still impressive story.

i really hope that you follow this up and tell what he actually had to do to gain it because the actual story arc never will...not now at least, so it will always be a mystery and you have a really good story going on here...you should continue with it and go on and make it more complete..waiting to hear more!

very dark and good

Lovely! ...too bad it's the end I would have liked to have seen what he ends up doing about the blood cost and when and how it awakens and what happens...guess that is a different story tho,m? Maa, thanks!
Ja ne!

wow this is awsome!

dark and atmospheric. the tension of his chosen task/path is clearly felt in the fic.

WOW that was good and agsty but mostly good (did I spell that right ?_? )

The sense of foreboding in this one is absolutely chilling.