It's absolutely well written and I like the plot in this chapter. I could picture it all. ^^ Can't wait for more!

A UPDATE!

YEAHY!! thank you!

hahaha.. I just love this part:

“I’m fine,” she mumbled as if being able to read her mind.

“Yet every time you say that you give me a new reason to be worried,” Davis replied.


XD so true, so true haha ^^ nice

Update as soon as you can =D

UPDATE!
oh my gosh!
please update! I want to know what happens next!
Oh and crystal finally opened up, more or less XD

Wahahaah I love the idea you have fro this story!
And Izzy, but what about Willis? and uh... ah!

:3 its so cute! UPDATE PLEASE!

Really good chapter. I love the Davis-part and the last part with Izzy and Crystal. It's very emotional and well written. I can't wait to read the next chapter

Pretty nice chapter, I liked Davis letting Kari go, so mature, is rare to see Takari fics where Davis is a nice guy and gets over Kari and lets her be happy with whoever she wants to be with ^^

Wonder if Patamon will get together with Gatomon? seeing how Veemon seemed to be seeing if he had chance with Gatomon, well at least from Davis' point of view XD

Nice, a slow chapter but it's nice. TK has to pull himself together if he wants to be with Kari... Great chapter. I can't wait to read the next one with all the action going on(^v^)

Wow. I like what's going on in this chapter. So the Dark Masters are back, huh? Interesting choice and like that the old gang is with them. I'm still intrigued by your idea of the new Digi-eggs and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good Job(^v^)

Pretty smart from Patamon to switch the bags, and how considerated not wanting to alarm TK nor his mother ^^

this is getting really good, I'm glad you updated it ^^

Very nice. Can't wait for the next one.

i read your story and it was so good! it's making me wonder what happens next! please update soon , so i won't go crazy waiting...haha (not gonna actually happen)


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This is interesting. T.K. was so close to telling her too.

I like that we get 2 stories in the same chapter. The first one is about the new enemy and the second is about TK' slove for Kari. That's a great idea to combine those. It's still pretty exciteing and well written. looking forward to read the next chapter... Great job (^v^)

Like this chapter very much. Althought it doesn't have a lot of action in it, it is still good because of the emotions that this chapter contains. I love the part where we hear about Tai's thoughts. That is awesome descriped. Furthermore I like the suspense at the end of the chapter. Can't wait to find out who will get the eggs. I think it is nicely descriped and well written too. A very nice and great chapter(^v^)! Keep up the good work!

Willis's theory sounds so exciting. A very good capter with excitement in it. Your writting is super and the plot of this chapter is fine as well. Can't wait to read the next chapter with the original digidestined (^v^)

Very nice!! Just as good as the other chapters!! Poor Lopmon and Terriermon... it's gotta be hard for them to see Willis like that...
Very nice!!