never in a million years would I think of a Bleach and CSI:NY crossover; your story is very creative and is very well written.
If you can, please finish the story! And add a bit of some Ichigo! XD

Nicley done.

cool story!! bisides not Reistu but Reiatsu!

great chapter, can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^

...I'm sorry if this seems crude, but it's something I really need to get off my chest. SEIREITEI. /Please/, for the love of GOD at least look at wikipedia to get the Japanese names spelled correctly! And the malaprops...[like in chapter 5...the phrase "Ukitake cocked an eye at the last bit but smiled pleasentry seeing her uncomfortableness," should probably read something like, "Ukitake cocked an eyebrow at the last bit, but smiled pleasantly, seeing her discomfort." Or something along those lines.] It's a great concept for a story and all...just these little things have a tendency to distract the reader. Or me, at least.

I hope to read more soon!!

Oddly enough I found this title very interesting. It makes for a funny crossover pairing, that perhaps you should do more of, as I could see the multitudes of fun of if anything scaring the bejesus out of the men and women of the CSI...XD

looks like something I'll like.

Out of curriosity, which characters are your own? I never watch CSI NY either, but at least I have some idea...I think. Ive seen enough CSI Las Vegas to at least know what theyre talking about. And I know my bleach enough to know what all the terminology means. Anyways, so far, looks to be a pretty interesting story idea. Hope it all works out well in the end. And I cant wait to see what happens next.

I must say this is rather well thought up. I really like it so far. Though your grammar could use a little more work, I really like it. Though, I must say a bit of your translations are wrong. If I'm correct, I believe the three you missed are spelled 'Fukutaichou', 'Zanpakutou', and 'reiatsu'. ^^ Good job so far on this, though!