 TwilightSong 2/4/08 . chapter 1 Hm. I do like this story. It is an interesting take on how Bob would react to the coming of his first child. And of course it is Bob/Helen and I will never get enough of that (seeing there is precious little of that here). So, thanks for a nice read.
Do you think you will continue writing more Incredibles fanfic? If so, I'll keep an eye out. Not that you asked for ideas, but I do like stories that take place before the movie (another reason why I liked this one). They can "fill in the pieces", even if only in fanfic form. I always wondered what made Helen fall for Bob (considering her NSA file said she was a heartbreaker).
Anyway, I apologize for rambling. Again, it was a nice story and it gave me a smile when I read it. |