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| Xewioso 2008-07-20 ch 20,  | abuseGreat story! It kinda surprised me, the turn it took. But I loved it! |
| Tenille 2008-07-20 ch 7, anon. | abuseGreat story! I love how you aren't resorting to typical o.c-superpowers. You did make one tiny mistake though... in chapter 5 you said her mentor was DC... Daredevil (and Elektra) are actually Marvel... Anyways! Great job on this story |
| Renavatio 2008-07-19 ch 20, | abusecool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool!cool! |
| ibelieveintruelove 2008-07-19 ch 20, | abuseWhat an amazing story! I really enjoyed it :) I love the idea of Bruce and Raelyn - I never really liked Rachel lol. I gotta check out the sequel :D |
| Wolf of Kohona 2008-07-18 ch 19, | abuseAgain, this is a wonderful story. PLease update when you can. I can't wait. I almost cried when Nero died. |
| Wolf of Kohona 2008-07-18 ch 14, | abuseGreat story so far! You have amazing writing skills. “If it was a joke there would be laughter or clowns,” And an ironic choice of words. *wink* |
| lilrockgirl95 2008-07-17 ch 19, | abuseOMG NO NERO! OMG I HATE CLIFFIES! LOL BUT I LOVE THIS STORY!so did bruce and rae like do it? cuz im confused! |
| haha21 2008-07-14 ch 19, | abuseOh, Geez! I go online to read your story, and this happens! Cliffhanger much? =] |
| Renavatio 2008-07-14 ch 19, | abuseMikey! Mikey! I think I like it! |
| theinstantstar15 2008-07-10 ch 18, | abuseI have really enjoyed reading your story and learning about the character you added in and the drama that follows her. Please continue because I am really excited to know what else happens. Your avid fan, IS15 |
| phoebemoon 2008-07-05 ch 18, | abuseZomg I just read your story from start to finish this morning and I love it ! Absolutely love it! Is there more? I notice that it doesn't say Complete at the top ! I hope that there is more. I would love to see some of that tension between the two of them resolved! Or a sequel would be wonderful. You went through the whole movie wonderfully and set up another story plot. Great Job! cant wait to read more. |
| haha21 2008-06-20 ch 18, | abuseWow. That was awesome. I can't wait for the next one! =] |
| Renavatio 2008-06-20 ch 18, | abuseawesome awesome awesome! update soon please! |
| lilrockgirl95 2008-06-19 ch 18, | abuseO...I'm surpirse Bruce hasnt gone after Raelyn!OMG Raelyn knows Bruce's secret!Dude I'm like spazzin!OMG...Raelyn like that chick u dont want to mess with or u get ur azz kicked! |
| lilrockgirl95 2008-06-17 ch 17, | abuseOmg I swear i love this story so freakin much! I love ur style of writting!! OMG not a cliffy! *crys* Please up to date quick! Whoa Batman abit lost in th emonet ain't he? Lol |