Good Job!

Good job. yeah, this is how it would go.

This is really good!

:D

thats true :)

this is really good, i really like it!

dobby

This was a really lovely missing moment. I enjoyed your take on Renee and your characterisation of Edward. :)

You really should right more chapters on this. It's a really good story. I hope you do. :)

ah! i sware...anything in edward's pov i love! so good! ] i assume you've read the portion of midnight sun? ]

Oh, continue to the next part. It's rude to leave your fans hanging with nothing but a string of imagination to survive!

CONTINUE.

That was really excellent. I know you tend to write one-shots but any chance of you continuing this one? I think it would be fascinating!

The end made me laugh! And Renee's reactions to carlisle! Great oneshot! Back to your profile now to have a look at the rest of your work!

that was good really good!

haha just like the other storys that i've read by you today amazing! :) x

aww Edwards meeting his girlfriend's mother...well sort of.

Btw I tried to review empathy, but because I already reviewed it before, it wouldn't let me (tear)(tear)

-Nikkirenzo59

So you do a lot of these types of things. They're very good (at least the ones I've read so far) and very nice. You're a wonderful author and you write this type of thing wonderfully.