this is pretty good. angel is interesting enough but she has some major Mary Sue tendencies, if she couldn't fight she'd seem more real, and if she wasn't named 'Angel' and something more fitting... don't ask me what... but anyway, i enjoyed it all the same, i really think it has the makings of a fantastic story! hope to read more soon!

I've really enjoyed reading your story so far. I hope to see the next chapter soon! Keep uo the great work!

i haven't read an escaflowne story in a while, or one with an OC in it...but this was really good, and i hope you put up the second part soon, drop me an email when you do, if you'd be so kind ]

This one is very well done, I loved it. You must be an experienced writer, it shows in your spelling and grammar. The storyline was done very well and the whole thing was entertaining.

I do hope that you don't change this one too much, and soon write the second part, considering how much storyline of Escaflowne you've covered, I'm thinking there should be at least a couple more parts about the same length as this one.

I thought it was cute, how she likes Dilandau and that she has a close bond with Van, although she hasn't seen him in ten years and doesn't remember him. I thought it was a nice touch for an ending.

Nice chapter please continue.

Nice chapter please continue.

I love this fic so far...are you going to update it soon? Man I hope so! I thought it was so funny that Folken is teaching Angel to fly just like a bird would...by pushing her out of the "nest" so to speak...man she is she going to be pissed when she lands! anyway please update soon!

Its long, yet great. I only finished reading the prologue. It is a story of rare quality as I can tell by just this little bit.

I'll add you to my favorite authors.

fantastic story! plz continue!

Hey! Great story! I'll be looking forward to see when Angel remembers she has another brother.

This is a great story. I wanna know what will happen next. Is Angel going to get her memory back? Please get the next chapter up soon.

hey, really good, defianately worth adding on to!

this is a really good story, keep u the good work and update soon!

Yay! You posted... finallly! great chapter! aww... chesta is stuck cooking again...
she beat dilly-sama? woo... not bad...

write more soon! i want to see what they're gonna have to slave away at!

damnit Allison! write more! i KNOW you have more written! i KNOW it ... e-mail me, i have somthin exciting to tell ya!-kitty Kate, aka Nightemare