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| electric-dreamer 2008-07-23 ch 2, | abuseHey, I've only got as far as chap 2 cus I'm busy and shouldn't really be in FF, but I'll defo be putting this on alert! =) FINALLY! A CSI story that actually has a CSI plot...I'm sick to death of DL romances or slash one shots! =P I'm all for a good cheesy love story but with CSI I love it because of the crimes and how they're solved! Anyway...I liked your character interaction...Its just the way it is in the show =D I'm also loving the icky killings...Serials are my fave... I shall come back and read the rest soon! Great so far! |
| Madison Bellows 2008-04-08 ch 7, | abuseWhat a great ending! I think it worked out fabulously, and while I am sad it is done, I am happy to have had it to read! |
| laplandgurl 2008-04-07 ch 7, | abuseThat is so true and that's what keeps me coming back for more. And what Adam says at the end to Cassie is so true - there is a writer "Dark Rolling Sea" (I think that is the correct name) she started out on ff and took one of her stories that she wrote for NCIS and rewrote it and it was published - it's called "A Child's Eyes". Keep the stories coming. |
| Aphina 2008-04-06 ch 7, | abuseI loved the endeing to this story because it was one noone expected. The killer got the wrong end of the stick. I think you showed how real life can truly be shocking. |
| lily moonlight 2008-04-06 ch 7, | abuseHi, I really enjoyed reading this, thank you for posting. Flack is one of my favourite characters, and I think you wrote him very well, nice interrogation scene, and loved the comment about why do they always run. Brilliant ending; I like Adam, and enjoy the little cameo moments he has in stories. Intriguing story, with an unexpected twist, very good. |
| Bec0512 2008-04-05 ch 7, | abuse“To nerd love.” Cute. Great Story, I really enjoyed reading it. :) |
| backstagespotlight 2008-04-05 ch 7, | abuseYay! I just wish I could have come up with this brilliant idea! This fic is so amazing... and I like the twist at the end... not having it be Candi. And of course, nerd love! nothing sweeter! Bravo! |
| CSI junkie 247 2008-04-05 ch 7, | abuseYa, we did see a lot of Adam. I loved this ending, certainly wasn't what I expected. And as an ending remark I must say...Hurray for Nerd Love! |
| CSI junkie 247 2008-04-05 ch 6, | abuseLove it. In my opinion we don't here enough about Adam in the show so this chapter totally made my day. I can't wait to see what happens, and I'm curious about those twists and turns. Keep it coming, you've got me hooked. |
| Aphina 2008-04-05 ch 6, | abuselol I'm playing catch up after the Trial and Tribulations regarding the dissertation. Sorry I wasn't online last night I pretty much collapsed after eleven on the couch and went to bed at 12, I didnt even feel like reading the comics I'd bought. Back to your story. I loved this chapter because you see a reaction to what they've done and it's sweet to see Aam and Cassie talking. the reason I enjoy this stry is because you go about the proces of showing us how a crime is owrkd out and I find that somewhat lacking in other stories. I do like this story and I wan them to catch her so badly! |
| laplandgurl 2008-04-04 ch 6, | abuseAh - now I get it - and I know what you mean - you do wade thru a fair bit of crap on ff - lol. |
| Madison Bellows 2008-04-04 ch 6, | abuseAw woobie Adam luv! Sorry, I digress. I do believe I have thought all of those things reading some of the stories on here. True life is inspiration (even when it is horrible writing). I enjoyed this chapter immensely, and I am going to be sad to see this story end. Good luck with the ending! :) |
| backstagespotlight 2008-04-03 ch 6, | abuseBeautiful yet again! I absolutely love this and can't wait to see more! |
| CSI junkie 247 2008-04-02 ch 5, | abuseI can't wait to see where this fanfiction trail leads. I love this story, really gets you thinking outside the box. (or monitor for that matter.) |
| laplandgurl 2008-04-01 ch 5, | abuseOh this is good and lol involving ff. |