Um... Perhaps you should reference the cannon material before writing a fanfic about it... You also should spend some time with a Thesaurus. Other than that the writing was decent. Next time put some more effort into your writing. With a little effort an average writer like yourself can become truly special.

Wow, short but good. I like it. Question, is the child a descendant of Integra, or what? Anywho it is good.