It... it was so sad ;~;
It was beautiful ;~;

Aw, that was such a sad story! I loved it! Poor little Keiko and Tsunade had to give her up! That is so depressing!

aw. i hope tsunade and jiraiya get together.

this is gonna have a happy ending... right??

Aw that was kinda sad! Please update SOON! I really want to know what will happen next!

aw. plz tell me that jiraiya and tsunade are going to get together! plz

WOW that was great! Please update soon! I loved it! It was AMAZING! It was also a little sad how Tsunade hit Keiko. TT

WOW THAT WAS GREAT! Do you know how to add chapters to one story? If yuo don't I can teach you!