I find the verses of your female caravanners particularly passionate, but then I can sympathise with them both. I found Gurdy's fate cruel because he, unlike the Black Knight, was not spared from it by death. I would hate to live like he does. As for De Nam, you know I have a certain fondness for his character and so Anais Nin's lines mean a little more to me than the others. Overall though, absolutely excellent. It's very inspiring and stirring, keep it up!

This is really really good! I love it!

Wow... I love your poem! Keep up the good work!

(PS: Great character names.)