 Sokai 2009-04-21 . chapter 1Hi! ^_^ Sorry to bother you, but I thought I should let you know that, since you've written a PGSM story, there's now an official category for it within the TV shows section, after I'd asked the site to add it yesterday. Now all of us won't have to sift through the mounds of regular Sailormoon fics to read PGSM-universe related stories. ^_^
Have a good one! ^_^ |
 trusuprise 2008-02-04 . chapter 1This is quite possibly the most powerful insight into Rei that I've ever read:
"There were two times where Rei felt the most complete; that the empty, gaping abyss in her had been suddenly filled with a feeling that she could not describe, perhaps it was contentment, but stronger by a thousand times. Once was when she had stood there, summoning the powers of Mars, calling forth her weapon, and found Venus’ in her other. The sensation…it was so powerful—her chest heaved, back and forth, and that emotion!"
The way you detail Rei's feelings, still so very insecure and uncertain of just what that emotion that she feels is, was very powerful, and so right-on, as was the way you addressed the blantent subtext we see in PGSM. The turning point, their kiss, was also nicely done, in both the build up, the dialogue, and then the sudden yet fitting change that softened them afterwards.
I really enjoyed this! |