Indeed

Flay is my fav character in Seed


this pair is the best

Nice! I agree with you guys... Fllay isn't bad.. She was a victim (of the war AND of Fukuda).. *LOL*

Great job!

Wanna make a full blown version? XD XD XD

most people hate fllay because they tend to see her from only one-side perspective. to me, fllay was the most dynamic character in gs. love her always...

so...emo...but i like it because it's Fllay we're talking here. good!

I like it. I think you do understand Flay's character...I didn't but now I realize she was just kind of lost. Thank you for this. Now I won't hate Flay as much as I used to.

Short but nice. I believe it denotes how she feels exactly.

This is very well done; almost poetry. It's kind of sad to see that Fllay hasn't forgiven herself, and that she thinks she doesn't deserve happiness (similar thing happening in my fic, but that's another story...literally).

It really is a shame that so many people think Fllay is evil. I mean, she makes a terrible mistake, but she realizes it and tries to fix things; it's not her fault that she's killed before she can apologize.

But I digress.

Anyway, this is a very poignant little short here, and I very much enjoyed it.

I like it!
Actually I like Flay and I understand her as well^^
This describes her quite well!