|Reviews for Hearts That Pump Dust|
| nyxthedragon 9/16/12 . chapter 23
I read this from start to now, not realizing that this wasn't even completed yet.
This is such a good story and its such a bummer to see this one not completed. I really wanted to know what was going to happen to them.
Though I do wish, Roxas would start connecting his "dreams" to what Axel is saying.
I've enjoyed what stories you have written so far.
| xox.heart 7/23/12 . chapter 23
So sadistic, leaving it here. Now I will be forever tormented by the possibilities, I pray for a happy ending, I just finished Water and I think that just killed my emotional capacity. You have me addicted to your writing style, so try not to leave me with a fix to long oke? C;
| Takara yume 5/14/12 . chapter 23
uwaah this story had got me hooked right from the start. ;w;
I feel bad for Roxy though, being taken and all, it's like you did a what-if spinoff of what might've happened if Roxas was taken back by Axel and ran away instead of coming back and Sora being Roxas' nobody kinda. XDD hehe awesome job! update soon please ;3;
| Rikus-Way-to-the-Dawn 4/28/12 . chapter 23
Sorry this won't let me log in for some reason. I'm also sorry to see it looks like this story might be on permenet hiatus. You've got a great thing going here & you're one of my absolute favorite authors in the fandom. It's great fun & all imagining what Roxas will come up with next but sometimes it's comforting to know the cannon of the story. Ya know? I hope to see this come full circle someday and I know I'm not the only one. I hope you're still writing even if it's not fic cu ur really talented. Please don't give up. Keep up the good work.
| Maddigan Hatter 2/12/12 . chapter 23
Hello. i absolutly love youre story,but why did u stop writing? Did you go and die under a rock? I hope not. Please write more!
| sakurasapprentice7 2/6/12 . chapter 23
Firstly I would like to point out the major flaw in this story - how addictive it is! I should've been studying for my exams (my Irish one being tomorrow) been instead I've been reading this! So the problem is... it's too good :P
It's so mysterious, especially relating to Sora but now everything is falling into place and it just clicked that that's where all of Roxas' money was going
I love that you gave the Twilight gang a bigger role, and the Seiner side-pairing is usually something I ignore but this time it seemed actually... plausible
I'll admit that if it wasn't Axel, I would hate Roxas' kidnapper. I know he has his reasons... but a part of me can't understand him - at least how he could love the past Roxas so much who had no feelings. So I'm really looking forward to finding out the full story of their past.
Sora is undoubtedly my favourite character in this! I just know that he had a kick-ass life before everything, I especially love the comment on how he could easily pick the lock (I assume that was him)
I wanna see more Riku! . But I'm just a big Riku-fangirl (along with Sora, Roxas and Axel of course) to be honest. I'm so interested in finding out his role in this - Does he know Sora is... alive in a sense in Roxas? Is that what him and DiZ are scheming? I love how some parts reflect the actual game series but not overtly - it's like a much darker Disney-less version of Roxas' story
Looking forward to the next update!
| AYMK00 1/23/12 . chapter 23
Oh my goodness, the intensity of the story is always thrown out of balance when Sora wakes up, hahaha. He breathes with this air of confidence that makes him seem untouchable, and it just messes with Axel's head as much as it does Roxas'; it's ridiculously funny.
Aaahhh. I love the concept of this story so much. Stories revolving around abductions are my faaavourite. Interaction between captives and captors have always peaked my interest, and for it to also involve Axel's melancholies makes me happy /shot
I really like the turmoil everyone's going through; how messed up Roxas and Axel's relationship was; how turbulent it is now. I also liked how rhythmic Hayner and Roxas were together; how well Seifer mashed into everything as a supportive figure; how lonely Sora is; how lonely Axel is; how all this 'bad' and 'good' is trying to outweigh each other. AND HOW MUCH SEXUAL TENSION IS IN THE AIR /DIES (strike)of which I find lovely coughcough(/strike)
Roxas is a doll, and Hayner is an awesome anchor.
I am hooked to thisss.
I shall wait with bated breath for your next chapter. Your writing is absolutely lovely and poetic, and it absolutely kills me when it depicts Axel's tension around Roxas. Tension tension tensionnnn. I love it way more to even consider hating it ahahaha.
Aaaah. This story will be the death of me.
Happy New Year! However late it is
Kung Hei Fat Choy, then, since it's only a day late for that greeting- therefore allowable in terms of time zones and dates recorded on fanfic.
Can't wait for the next story, bby
| runes01 8/27/11 . chapter 23
Soooo, wait a minute. Sora is in Roxas's body, Roxas forgot his memories of the Organization and Axel's kidnapped him. And now, they're on the run, right?
Cause it's sorta odd when all of a sudden you switch from Roxas to Sora to Axel. I mean, I like this story, but I get sorta confused on who's who.
But, anyways, like it so far, waiting for the next update
| aznwhitekid 6/17/11 . chapter 23
I stopped reading this fanfic after Roxas was abducted from Twilight Town because I was just reading it whenever and not really getting anything...but after a while I started over and read the entire thing beginning to end and OH MY GOD. Damn! You got one hell of a story going for you here!
There's so much mystery and suspense and feeling that I just can't help myself from wanting to know what happens next! I hope you update soon because I can't wait to find out what that Sora/Roxas duel personality thing is all about! And what happened to DiZ and Riku anyway?
Can't wait for the next update! :-)
| Anon 6/13/11 . chapter 23
Please please please update this. I love this story and it's driving me nuts. I read it 7 times and i want to know what happens next.
| LoveSickKid 3/18/11 . chapter 23
ah man! Just Read all the way through this and stared blankly upon finding no 24th chapter! Hope you're finishing it, i really want to find out how it ends.
| Onuard 2/6/11 . chapter 23
I thought the story got off to a pretty slow start, I won't lie, but now that they're finally at least together, it's insanely interesting/suspenseful once again.
Although, it's killing me wondering whether in the end Roxas will go back to that "grey" personality all over again (which would be sad!) if he and Axel end up being mutual once again. And if Roxas will be cured!
You certainly do do hopelessness and conflict of interest very well! I kept having to look up during the story and asking myself why I was so worried, haha.
Either way, I'm a huge fan of your other stories; Water, The Unfamiliar, Marked and Hunted, etc. You're a great writer!
| mornir-brightflame 2/6/11 . chapter 23
Wah, I was out of the country when I got the email for this update, and checking emails via phone in another country is one thing, but with the money it would cost to open an internet browser on my phone abroad I could probably buy out the Microsoft corporation! I'm definitely relieved the wait is over, though!
Man, I'd forgotten how much I enjoy this story - something about it makes me uncomfortable and puts me on edge every time I read it, definitely in a good way. Although the phone call to Hayner was just plain SAD. I adore Hayner in this particular story for some reason - he's generally not a favourite of mine. I think it's possibly because he's so normal and nice in comparison to the other crazies you've got running around. Axel, tbh, is constantly creeping me out with his pervy!kidnapper vibe. And I don't know if you've played 358/2 Days, but there's a scene right near the end before Xion goes completely apeshit, where she takes off her hood and instead of her face, she has a chubby Sora-face. That's the visual I've been getting when Roxas has his Sora episodes, and frankly, it's scary!
I'm feeling a bit apprehensive about this fork Roxas is carrying around. Not that I'm not all for a bit of resistance to being kidnapped, but fork-stabbings make me feel a bit squeamish.. I.. would be totally fine if he just picked a couple more locks with that fork (for the love of God please don't let him stab out an eye). Anyway, thanks very much for an awesome update, and good luck for this year - hope it's better than the last!
| Fuutaba 1/30/11 . chapter 15
WTF? Noooo, not my poor Hayner! I cried so bad at the last few lines. Didn't he get tortured enough, urrrggghhhh! You built an amazing friendship between Hayner and Roxas and then you just TOOK it /flails
It's like fffing KH2 all over again, poor Roxas will never see his friends again and Hayner and the rest as well, will never see Roxas again, IT'S NOT FAIR DAMMIT. The only time they did was when he was reunited with Sora. . . .don't tell me that's what you're planning? UGH! I can't even tell what you're thinking, WAY too many plot twists to figure you out man! I have soooo many possible outcomes bouncing around in my head, but I can never decided on one fully 'cause you keep screwing with my head.
I can't read anymore sadness tonight, I'll have to pick this up again tomorrow.
| Fuutaba 1/30/11 . chapter 14
OH MY GOD! I have been reading this straight for like two days! I was up until 4am reading this, it's that amazing! I mean, like, woah! I've been looking for a good sort of 'all-encompassing' sort of story. And this has just taken the cake. I was a little turned off to the whole Olette/Seifer because I'm a huge Seifer/Hayner fan. Hayner having such a large role in this was what really made my day3
But! I stuck it through that relationship faux pas, and was damn well rewarded when I hit this chapter. I was like HELL YES! I had an underlying feeling that some Seiner loving was floating around here, but I was squashing my hope because there's been so many twists and turns that I didn't wanna get my hopes up. But holy shit you delivered! This is definitely one of those amazingly written fics that makes you sit back and think really hard on all the events taking place.
Uggghh, so much suspense I just hope it ends well in the end!