Awesome story you have here. It is one of the few oneshoot stories out there.

I have to thank you in doing a good job in writing a story that has Petunia caring about Harry. This is the first one that I have read that has this.

I liked the plot because of its originality and the characterizations that you have of the characters.

It was really sad when Harry died, I almost wanted to cry; the devistation that Petunia felt upon his death and the way Harry defended Petunia made me want to cry.

There are lots of questions, though, that I have pertaining to how it ended though. Such questions are, what will happen to the wizardry world when Voldemort returns to power now that Harry is gone. How will the wizardry world react to Harry's death?What happens to everyone?...

I recommend on writing a multi-chapter story along the lines of this...

Overall, great job; it was a pleasure to read this one-shoot. Keep up the good work and I wish you luck with your other writing work.

Interesting twist and use of repitition. Vernon seems like a human and a monster at the same time.

Are you going to have a sequel when Dumbledore finds out?