Wow...

Actually, I can see Kuwabara passing on like that. I wonder if Shindou will ever understand that last line...

Well written. Good read.

Oh wow. That last part actually made me cry. :( Great fic.

Oh... my... God! So good! I love this fic, amazing, so funny, brilliant... yeah. A fave definitely!

Nice. I liked it. Especially: Immoveable Honinbou, that's me.

I love Kuwabara. I want to be an old geezer like him. Well, female, but y'know. He's great. xD

I really liked this piece. Especially the "death scene". >w< This was pretty humorous. ^^-

I love it! Pretty interesting, and realistical! Loved his last eschange with Hikaru, it was fun!

I never knew a fic about Kuwabara was going to be so interesting, fun and tragic. I love it. You are really talented to keep us, the readers interested about a tertiary character. You know the only thing this fic is missing, a sequel, some kind of reaction from another player's perspective: coughs *Ogata* coughs. ;)

Really nice . This is why I'm deeply in love with HnG. There are a lot of really interesting character , great relationships depicted. I can't believe they stopped the manga while there were still so much to tale . There are so much manga which carries on with far less content . The new insight you gave on Kuwabara was worth reading. Maybe you could do the same work for Ogata . Carry on .

ah well, figured, if Kuwabara died, he wouldn't go the normal and boring way, ne? Hey, he gets first dibs on Sai! Poor Touya Kouyo...

I wish that was canon

wow. what a great story. Kuwabara always was an oddball in the series and I love how well you captured it. It made him feel more human. Not to mention that his thoughts on his relationship with Ogata were very touching.

Gonna go check what other stories you've written now!

This was a good fic, very touching. I liked how Sai the power behind Honinbo Shuusaku showed up to greet Kuwabara.