This is a lovely and amazing story that with only two reviews seem greatly underapperciated. The birth and rebellion of Orienta are compelling and intriuging to read. The interaction of Nyx and Hynpos (and the others) leaves wanting more. I would love to read more of this and shall wait patiently for the next chapter.

(Sorry, I'm not very good at critiques if that is what you apperciate more.)

Anyway, this is a wonderful story.

Great work. Philosophical in his own right, can't wait for more! ^.°

Beautifully written - I can't wait to read more.