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| Pied Flycatcher 2008-05-15 ch 1,  | abuseHaha. The image of Voldemort in a car is a profoundly strange one. One little tip: the dialogue punctuation is incorrect. Dialogue tags shouldn't be capitalised i.e. it should be "Okay!" he said, rather than "Okay!" He said. |
| Siacatmesecat 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abuseI think I'm in love... You can do it, Voldy! It's just a car, after all. *insanelaughter* My favorite line was, "smiling as sweetly and as innocently as she could and knowing it was probably the furthest thing from sweet and innocent known to mankind." I want to take Drivers Ed from Bellatrix! Way more fun than my school instructors! Thank-you! I'm going to print this and stick it in my journal. I love it! |
| Bellatrix wannabe 89 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseHaha, clever, funny, I like it :) |
| JoSchmo666 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseHlmfao! HaHAHA! I was wondering what he was trying to work. I thought uit mught have been a gun at one point. Haha |
| RebeccaRoy 2008-02-04 ch 1, | abuseNow that was funny! |