Reviews for The Fall of Domino

Reviews For: The Fall of Domino

Guardian's Light 2008-02-23 ch 3,	abuseFinally, I've caught up with all my reading. Anyway excellent chapter and conclusion. I wish I could write endings that good. Oh, well.
tears-in-rain 2008-02-22 ch 3,	abuseAw! I loved it! I had suspicions Glinda and Elphaba being Faragonda and Griffin in chapter one but I could never really be sure till I read this chapter. And the way Prince Atmos was cracking jokes just gave you this feeling he was from Eraklyon. But even though I had all these hunches it was so good at the end where everything kind of fell into place. It was so well constructed. Well done! Now that I’ve got all my excited, girly gushing out of the way, I’m gonna totally change emotions to one of melancholy. When Ameryl died it was just like . . . no! Poor Saladin. That whole predicament was just so heartbreaking what with her being used and betraying them and then Saladin opening her eyes but it was just too late. Heartbreaking! Again man, you’re just . . . wow. And the best bit is that this is just the prologue. I can’t wait to hear more. Seriously, I’ve had one crappy day today and reading that chapter has made me feel so much better. Thanks heaps, ay Cheers, tears
Chibi Horsewoman 2008-02-19 ch 3,	abuseSo, is there going to be a sequel in your POV? I hope so because that could be interesting
Chibi Horsewoman 2008-02-19 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is pretty good. And I like Glinda and Elphaba, you've been reading WIcked haven't you?
tears-in-rain 2008-02-15 ch 2,	abuseWow. Anything you write always seems to amaze me. I could print out your work, bind them, place them amoungst the fantasy section of any book store and they seriously wouldn’t seem out of place. Your wording is just incredible and so mature. I can’t wait to see more of it. And I loved the way you slipped Rhienlocke into your story. The way you’ve described him really explains why Sky might be so impressed with him during Season 2 Episode 5. Keep up the good work. Cheers, tears
Knight of Aura 2008-02-12 ch 2,	abuseSorry for the semi-late review, my computers been buggy the last few days, but the wait was well worth it! A fleshy tunnel, with a traitor and not only one but two semi-p-o'ed Elves? Awsome! I have to say I like your Palladium much better then the shows, he has a lot more character, more charisma as well I guess, and is just great. I've always liked Saladin, so reading about him being captured is kind of a hard thing to read, but I think he's gonna whip out some mean magic mojo the way he's going. Rhienlocke kicks butt like last time, and I have to say I like him better then normal, probably because he isn't some pansy-tree-hugging archer too full of himself to help anyone else out. Your use of words to describe things is amazing, and I can easily picture a lot of this happening in my head. Do keep up the good work, and don't worry if something over runs a bit, it is well worth it if the quality is as good as this.
Knight of Aura 2008-02-05 ch 1,	abuseNice name dropping there, lets see...Palladium (elf teacher dude from Alfea), Saladin (cool headmaster of Red Fountain), Baltor/Valtor (villain from the newest season) and Atmos is the name of the world from Storm Hawks...>< Heh, really awsome story you've got going here though. I like the descriptions of the battlefields and Saladin's thoughts, well all the characters thoughts. And Rienhlocke is cool, an elven Paladin? Awsome:D My favorite parts have to be the small bits of humor through out it, "He prayed to whatever gods were still listening, though one look around shook his faith at the moment, that he did not run into any more obstructions on the way; particularly those of the "I'm going to eat you" variety." Best line ever. Keep up the good work!
Guardian's Light 2008-02-04 ch 1,	abuseNice start. I will admit to being unnable to tell some of the names you put in, but I'm not much of a Winx Club fan. I barely remember the girl's names actually.

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