Interesting though lacking in detail... =(

Keep practising! ^-^ Interesting plot.

Aw, cute! Tom being nice... interesting. Update soon!

Aw, poor Tom. I always felt bad for him you know, being unloved and all. Excellent fan fiction. Good work

Happy Writing

I like it! The tense was a little weird to read, but you worked it. I love how you remember all these people's names!

I really like the plot, very sweet in a weird kind of way. I love the names! I am super bad at thinking them up, please continue and update soon!

I'm in love with this story so far. Update, please!

Nice setup! I shall wait anxiously to read more.
Good job on remembering their names too. I can't. For the life of me.
Update soon!xx