This story has been my favorite on FF since i started reading it last year. I think it is one of the best stories about Dasey. I hope you keep writing this story and you get some inspiration.

I am definitely still out here! Reading and loving the story. I had pretty much forgotten what had happened in the last chapter, but I caught on pretty quickly during this chapter. I thought it was a really good chapter! Bit of drama but nothing TOO hard core because we know that Whitney is gonna believe Cam right? Mm, she better. That couple is seriously my favorite part of this story! So adorable.
It may have been short but it was still a great chapter!

As short as this was, it was necessary! And I really liked how everyone stood up for Whit.
I hope she and Cam work that whole mess out. Girls like Ashley are all too common, and they are oh so irritating! Ugh.
As for feedback...I'm stuck in my own story right now, so I don't know if I could be much help! lol. You always have such good ideas though. I hope inspiration hits quickly! I hate when I can't finish a chapter or start one for lack of inspiration! It really sucks! :(
Keep up the great work!

Shellie, you're alive! How are you??

I had sort of forgotten where the story left off but th way you set up the beginning of the chapter it came right back. Ashley is EVIL.

I know Whit and Cam will make up, but it's so sad to see them fighting! (If you can call that fighting). I'm glad you posted this little chapter!

this is really good. please update son :)

Oddly enough i want to help you on this, but the main problem my main ideas are for cam and whitney, (my favorite couple in this story the way he is whipped is so funny sometimes) but i have some ideas for others also, so please pm me on here as soon as possible and we can think up some ideas or email me at so Please get back at me ASAP to know if your interested. and Great story so far and would love for you to finish this right please... bye for now.

short but sweet! and I'm still here. But I know what you mean about the chapter sitting on the computer. Just when I think I have my next chapter I want to trash it and start again.

So how's life Shelli... my life has been a roller coaster but fun... maybe some inspiration for a new story, lol

I hope you'll keep at it, though I'm sure after 109 chapters you reach the point that you dont know what else to do... but like always, its fabulous!!

that was the best citney chapter yet, very oddly cute in a sense, (couldn't find another word for it but its still was cute) and hope they would still remain a couple so good stuff and looking forward to reading more. Laters Oh and when your going to do something about cage also would like to see his trial and tribulations in the NFL and with women and if you need help with that pm me i have some good ideas about cage alright? Great stuff and hope you can keep going.

Wonderful Writing! I am so glad that you updated! Now I really want to see Whit and Cam resolve this, I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to see what will happen (no pressure or anything *innocent eyes*). I love all of the couples. I look forward to reading about the forthcoming hockey practice and to see what Jenna and Whit do about this Ashley girl. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for sharing your awesome talent!

It may have been short but it was very good. Maybe you can have Cam run into Whit at the hospital because he went to see Casey and the baby. It might get them to talk about a few things. Keep it up.

Oh I o not like Ashley! Jordon cracks me up! Dumb and Dummer,lol.
I'm glad Gage was there!
Awsome Job!
OF COURSE I'm still reading! How's the fmaily?
I AM goin on a cruise this Friday and won't be back till Wednesday but if inspiration hits while I'm gone This will be the first thing I read when I get back!!
~Crystal

Hey you know I'm here. :) I can't stand people like ashley. I love Gage's description of her. I've been wondering if citney were going to sit down and have a heart to heart. I've just sorta thought one maybe coming not sure why. I guess with their night together in the hotel, her modeling contract, and now this. I hope you and your family are doing great. and as always I look forward to the next update :)

Dean

STILL HERE! Just taking the occasional too busy to breathe break. I think that this is actually good for him because the two of them do have some issues. Like what happens since he's older ect. tht kinda stuff, this should get Whit thinking regardless. Keep it up!
=D
-mari

LOL on Gage calling some of the guys dumb and dumber, you a Jim Carie fan?

OMG! What a story. I love it. It took me a week but I have read all of it and can't wait for more. It have been done very well. I can not believe the ending of this chapter. Can I kill Ashley?!?! What will Jenna do? Oh wow a can of worms seems to have been opened. Looking forward to more.