Just taking a quick break from reading to throw a review your way
So far, this story has been a real delight. Dawn ans Ironhid'es interaction is charming and the rest of the characters fit in nicely. Even your OC's are fun.
Totally looking forward to the remaining chapters

Yay! I read this on AFF but it only had 4 chapters and by some miracle I managed to find it here and TtH with over 20, me so happy! :D
Really loving it!

Sweet chapter! It's so frustrating to be in Dawn's position. I'm getting frustrated reading it. So I hope Sam and Mikaela can work things out. And I hope that Ironhide can change Joyce's mind. I am going to LOVE reading that. I wonder what Dawn will think if she learns that Ironhide convinced her mom. Maybe she won't want to get rid of the connection. I am seriously pumped to see how they all react to Dawn being the Key. That is going to be CRAZY! And I kinda wanna see the Autobots kick some demon ass. Yay! Still totally love this story! I told you I'd read it as soon as I woke up! :P

-Ray

Hoo boy…
It’s official; things are NOT getting any easier right now.
I mean, not only do we have Dawn and Ironhide not entirely happy with each other while Sam and Mikaela have had a falling out- hope they get past that; I really thought they made an interesting couple in the film-, but Joyce is trying to stop Dawn from spending time with the first people she’s met who wanted to spend time with her because she’s HER…
So much for any hopes that things are going to be more straightforward just because both sides know about each other, huh?
Still, at least the two groups are getting along well enough; the dynamic you’ve created between Anya and Ratchet in particular should be interesting to witness in greater detail as the two of them continue to spend time talking about stuff without fully considering how others will react, and I look forward to seeing how things go from here on in.
If nothing else, the fact that the Autobots still actually LISTEN to Dawn and make valid points about WHY she should have told them everything rather than just saying (Essentially) “You should have told us everything that’s up with you when we don’t tell you everything that we’re doing” suggests to me that Dawn’s going to consider herself more of an Autobot ally than a Scooby at this point; at least the Autobots actually treat her as ‘one of the group’ rather than the ‘tag-on’ she is in the Scooby Gang at the moment.
So… any chance they’ll find out about Starscream’s presence next chapter (After Ironhide’s said whatever he’s going to say to Joyce- and I REALLY hope he’s not letting his current bad mood affect what he’s about to say-, of course)?
Dealing with a robot who turns into a police car is one thing; if they learn that Starscream’s hanging about- even if he’s not at full strength right now-, I have a feeling they’re going to want to have at least SOME… outside contacts, if you know what I mean… available if things turn ugly.
Keep up the good work!
(Just out of curiosity, if I’ve got my timing right we have that ep with the extraterrestrial brain-sucking demon coming up soon for Buffy and the gang; will you be re-doing that one, and, if so, will the Autobots know about it?)

about time nice update except it was too short!

This is could either make things better or send them down the toilet.

Very cool. The conversation between Anya and Ratchet cracked me up.

Oh God, Anya. You do an awsome job of writing her. I wouldn't be able to half that stuff out without blushing and leaving my computer for a few minutes. She's awsome.

And poor Starscream. When the heck is he going to get out of there?? Dang it.

And Dawn better not! Seriously! One fight! C'mon! Dawnie no! And I also hope and Sam and Mikeala make up.

I'm glad everything's pretty much out in the open. Yay! No more secrets, well at least the currently resolved ones. There are definitely a few things that need to come out into the open. The Key for instance. That's gonna be fun to see how they all take it, especually Ironhide.

Update soon please! :)

-Ray

o.o...why would she want to get rid of it! i would keep it forever! anyway love it! cant wait till you continue see yha

when are you going to update?

Ho boy...

Buffy's a jerk, Ironhide's a jerk, Spike's a jerk! They are all jerks and yet I still love them all. OMG Trent NO! I don't want him to die. He was so worrie about his sis and now she's a vamp! Someone save him! Or not. Let's see what happens! Love it still!

-Ray

Oh yeah… Now THIS is interesting!
If nothing else, the idea of Dawn becoming involved with an Autobot- even if she hasn’t started the relationship yet- is DEFINITELY going to be amusing; I wonder how Buffy and Joyce (Assuming Joyce is still alive when Dawn and Ironhide give it a go, of course) would react to THAT?
On the one hand, we have Dawn dating Mikaela- who’s a girl, but is at least Dawn’s SPECIES-, and on the other, we have Ironhide- a giant alien robot, but at least he’s a MALE giant alien robot.
Quite frankly, I’m not sure what one’s going to freak them out more…
Still, given that Buffy’s dated a vampire and Willow’s been involved with a werewolf, it’s not like Dawn would be the first girl in the Scoobies to have an ‘odd’ relationship, so- once they get past the initial shock- things should be all right.
Of course, on the topic of Autobot/Decepticon involvement in Buffy’s fight against Glory, so far both groups seem to be ‘working’- if you can use that term when referring to the fact that the demons seem to enjoy tormenting Starscream and Barricade almost as much as they enjoy trying to kill the Scoobies- very well together; now that the initial ‘confusion’ has been put aside- with the Scoobies having already attacked the Autobots- I’m looking forward to seeing how the Autobots will ‘rationalise’ the existence of something as unusual as magic.
Plus, of course, I have to wonder how everyone will react Optimus and the others will explain WHY Ironhide was drawn here in the first place; will it prompt Buffy to reveal the truth about Dawn earlier, or not?
Well, hope you update soon; I am DEFINITELY looking forward to where things are going from here!
(Oh, and if you’re interested in a couple of story recommendations, I can recommend you check out “A Slayer Transformed” by Philip S- another Buffy/Transformers crossover where Faith saves Optimus’s life on her way to Sunnydale and ends up forming a bond with the Autobots- and Blackwing.Rose’s ‘Deux Claret’ series- featuring stories such as “How We Seared the Sky” and “The Day We Hailed the Heavens”, set after the movie and featuring Starscream joining the Autobots and actually falling in love with a human; might sound strange, but it’s VERY good nevertheless)

KICK A$$! That is all I have to say. I can't wait to read more of this addicting and thrilling story!

Sorry it took me so long to review. I'm gonna POed beyond all belief when Buffy gives Dawn crap. She's such a hypocrit I wanna smack her. Update soon! Can't wait!

-Ray