So glad you're still writing this! I wondered when our mystery woman would reappear...but the question remains...who is she? Hope you update soon!! Love it!

THanks very much for the update! Please, please dont keep us waiting so long for the next one! I'm really enjoying this story! Lots of tension, sexual and dangerous, built up here. Loved the little bit with with Flack and Angell and of course the ending was brilliant. i'm sensing something goign on here with this couple,. please updae soon!

Great chapters 11 and 12 keep up the great writing and please update again soon.

this is real great reading, keep going

wow this is really good, when is the next chapter going to be up?

glad this has updated. really loved the idea of the story. Half of the time I want them to be together already so that we can return to the end of chapter 1 while the other half I like the idea of seeing this relationship develop. So yes, do update soon. Either way, I'll be happy.

Love it. Add more soon.

Oh buddy! I was excited to see that you had updated! :) It was funny that they were both worried about the other being in a forced marriage. Damn those new neighbors, I was hoping that Mac was going to say he loved Stella. Hope you can update again soon.

Wow! Amazing chapter! Very intnese! I really enjoyed it! The dinner was perfect! The timing of the visit sucked, didn't it? Is Elena the woman who had been watching them in the SUV earlier? I look forward to reading more!

An update! The beginning with Flack remembering Stella's birthday was bittersweet. I love the birthday dinner. Mac's so sweet. I'm intrigued about how Elena and Rodrigo will fit in. Hope another update will come soon!

love it! i think its really good, you need to put the next chapter on!

This is a great story, but could you move on to the latter time, when Stella and Mac are returning, soon. I just think that would be more interesting than them living a lie. I want to know how the team takes them being alive, why they came back, and how the team will react to them having a kid. Thanks for listening, I'm going to go read your crossover now. Bye.

nicely done. due to the prologue, I can't wait to see them back in NY. However I also like how you're taking the time to develop their relationship. do update soon!

Yay! Thanks for the update on this :D I was so happy to see it! Really looking forward now of course to the next one! Fantastic chapter. I love how you've moved things on, and show how the team and those close to Mac and Stella have continued with their lives, completely unaware of the continuing existence of their friends. Loved Danny and Lindsay's little bit, and the pride of Danny. Very poignant Stella's feelings about Mac and the different identities of love. i wonder if this is going to be put to the test? I'm very worried about the black haired woman. Good luck with all your exams, and hope you can update again soon! I'm hooked!

Wonderful chapter! I really enjoyed it! I look forward to reading more! This was actually the first CSI: NY story that I read and it got me totally hooked, both with the fics, but also with the show again, so thank you!