Only one thing to say... If there is Revy and Rock in this story, then you SHOULD continue...

u should continue and add more detail and junk. This is a really good story and im not just saying that cuz i want 2 kno wat the hell happens.

Not bad at all its looks interesting, but you should writte longer chapter and in the next fights you can describe them, well 'til next update then.

From Venezuela
D4rK

interesting ... you going to continue?