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| TenshiGosuperu 2008-07-22 ch 7, | abuseOh my god, now Yozak knows...what will he do? Great chapter, by the way. :) |
| lazy fat kitsune 2008-07-22 ch 7, | abuseO...the cat's out of the bag now! Will the word spread out to Yuuri?! Geh, More! |
| Joice a.k.a. Europa 2008-07-21 ch 7, | abuseThings are getting more serious! I hope Yuuri knows the truth... |
| rowen raven 2008-07-21 ch 7, | abuseyay! the cat is out of the bag! wow what will yozak do, he will confront conrad obviously, but what will conrad say in his favor, and will yozak keep the secret, make conrad tell them, or will he uncover conrad himself, oh too much tension, please up date soon! i need to know! ja ne! |
| Knight of Caeli 2008-07-21 ch 7, | abuseOhh . . . Someone's really in trouble now! |
| I Hate Conrad 2008-05-13 ch 5, anon. | abusenice chapter! update soon! |
| phantome101 2008-05-10 ch 5, | abuseLOL...a very, very late review but...could it be possible that ozak and the maoh bay suspect something?? |
| potato chips 2008-05-07 ch 5, anon. | abuseI liked the new chapter. I am glad that you updated. What's going to happen now that everyone is in the room. Will Wolfram actually say just to get Conrad out of the room? What will Yuri do once he finds out? I hope that you update soon. Until then... |
| bobbyneko 2008-04-30 ch 5, | abuse>< aw man you HAVE to update this soon! it's so intense. Poor Wolfram~ That sucks so incredibly bad. and by his own brother too! what is he going to do!? |
| Mrs. Suou 2008-04-30 ch 5, | abuseI don't know if I schould cry, punch this dumb bastard in his face or if I just should congratulate you for your excelent stile. You really let me go through heaven and hell while I read this (although it's hell most of the time ^^). Please continue soon!! |
| emina 2008-04-30 ch 5, anon. | abusehey! :D i really like the plot so far. i just got a bit confused by what happened in chapter4 but chapter 5 pretty much cleared it up. im really looking forward to how the plot develops. i hope you update soon. :3 |
| rowen raven 2008-04-29 ch 5, | abuseCool even Yozak wants to join the hunt, i'm wondering what his reaction will be to know it was his captain who did it, not to mention everyone elses, Gwendal's and Yuuri's in particular. I'm wondering, I know he is not even in the story but if Murata where here, I wonder who'd find out what happened first, Murata or Yozak, cause i'm fairly sure that of the people in the room, yozak will be the first to find out. thinking about it lady celi would be distraught too. Now a batlle of wills will take place, and if there is something that gwendal and wolfram share is their stuborness. Let the Hunt beging! ja ne! |
| Blue_Pheonix 2008-04-29 ch 5, anon. | abuseHEy: No...it's a cliffy. LOl I can understand where Gwendal and the others are worried aout, but give the kid some room to breath and calm down. He was traumatized by his brother. Poor Conrad, he hates himself what he did, and he knows he'll be killed for it. He didn't have control over his own body, maybe he will tell them to get it over with. Not sure, but for now, I don't think Wolf will talk for a while, and everyone might leave him alone with Conrad, and when the time comes they will have a serious conversation. Please write the next chapter soon! oh, and please write back, just so I know ya got this, thanks! Bye, ^_^ |
| maggie 2008-04-29 ch 5, anon. | abusei wanna kill conrad...but please continue |
| pikeebo 2008-04-29 ch 5, anon. | abuseHm .. suddenly it makes me wondered if Conrad was aware that he assulted his Wolfram? He was afterall drunk! and many wakes up not remembering what happened the night before! Maybe Conrad suspected something, or otherwise he won't be "pretending" innocence, would he? he isn't such a person, is he? and Wolfram here still defending conrad .. why he does that? because he doesn't want Yuuri to look down on him?? poor Wolfram. I hope Yuuri is angry because of feeling deeper than friendship. tahnks for update! |