Wow Bekkah! This was amazing! Dark and enthralling, the language was brilliant! I hope to see more of Children of War soon, I always welcome a good read xD

Hannah!

Oooooo intresting! It's been a while! And it's just as good as I remember! The suspense kills me xD

Great chapter! This is getting interesting. Thanks for writing this. God bless!

This is interesting. The ending is certainly fascinating. It's annoying to have to read an entire chapter in italics, but I have no other gripes. The writing and grammar certainly seem to be thought-out and well-edited, respectively.

Again: Interesting.

-Lover of Gone

Yay! you finally posted the new version! It's much better than the first if you don't mind me saying:p

Post more soon!

it's interesting thanks I'll send you my new storiein a bit

HII!(Waves!) Wow great chap write moree soon!

Hi!This is AMAZING i love this story and hope you never stop writing(Thanks for deticating this chap to me i'm honoured(sniffs Lol) byebye

This chapter was rather suspensful... I love it! Thanks for writing this. God bless!

Great story! This was a rather funny chapter. :P Thanks for writing this. God bless!

Great chapter! Are the Vampires Shade's Children too? Thanks for writing this. God bless!

Very interesting chapter. Thanks for writing this. This is very good. God bless!

Great chapter! Thanks for writing this! This was interesting. God bless!

Thanks for the list. It makes things easier.

Great chapter but one problem! There's too many characters, I can't keep track of them all. Anyway, thanks for writing this! God bless!