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Reviews For: Truth Behind the Lie

xXCloudAngel016Xx
2008-02-07
ch 1,
abuseOkay, umm, whos this jenova person? this doesn't make cents! Sephiroth doesnt have a mother!

Sephiroth: Don't remind me! (cries)

me: Aww its okay Sephy! (hugs)

Sephiroth: :3

Me: Okay well anyway u shoudl try a little harder with your writing because this wasnt very good at all.
MyIncentive
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abuseWhoa, this is a take on Sephiroth's reasoning as I've never read or considered before, very possible.
Poor, poor Sephiroth.
That last sentence definitely pulls on one's heartstrings, that's for sure.
CornCob
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abuseI hate this word, but...
This was awesome.
Really and truly. Never had I put it in that light before, and I am sure I am not the only person who was like "Oh, hold crap. That's dang plausible!"
This was super well written, and ultimately just so...interesting.
The small size kept it from running on, as well as keeping it from being intimidating to read, haha (for those lazy readers out there, I guess, ha),

LOVED it
Aeriths-Rain
2008-02-04
ch 1,
abusewow. this is stunning, brilliant but very sad.
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