Luke being manly and all. Horny. Iunno.

It's hot!

Lol.

Smexiness. <3

XD

You should totally make this like a full story..

Of like.

Luke and Tear making sounds as if they were having sex.

But theyre doin something else.

And everyone else is like Omg theyre having sex.

But theyre not.

And when they finally are having sex.

Everyones just like.

Bleh theyre just probably doing something.

LOLOL.

I read it once but I cant seem to remember the story!! X)

How cute, it was lovely and fluffy. Good job.

Oh my my! I do like Luke Tear fluff. Heh, this is good.

I liked it. It wasn't beat-around-the-bush. :)

Hot.

Just when I thought it was going to be a typical Valentine's story involving gifts and chocolates... But hey, I'm definitely not complaining! I wonder how Jade and Natalia will react after overhearing their tryst.

I do agree with Black Acid Dragon regarding the "Mystearica" part though. I'm just more used to Van using that name. Moreover, I think you were referring to "conscience" (and not "conscious") on the 3rd to the last line.

I had a good laugh at those last lines. Good job :)

Oh dear, I must be blushing like hell now. XD I don't mind sex scenes as long as they aren't just plain porn or something. You managed to describe a very sexy situation without going too into detail, which is pretty good.

You mispelt Tear's real name, though. It's Mystearica. IMO Luke calling her that is pretty hot... XD

*drool* Great writing. The only thing is that it kinda creeps me out when people have Luke call Tear "Mysterica," because in my head I can only hear Van saying it...

Anyway, good job, and I can totally see it happening.

Ooh, this is the first time I've read any sort of soft-core Lukear lemon. M, zesty. X3

I loved how you depicted the characters, in this rare, mushy--naughty--moment. Although, I think it would have been more effective, or more leading, if the last two dialogue lines were reversed. Have Luke admit it, then perhaps a silence to gather a little suspense as to Tear's response... and then BAM! Tear's returning the favor by riding bareback without a saddle, adding in sensually, teasingly, "I love you, too." A closer for the suspense and emphasizes the line, "This time, it was his turn to be on his back."

...Then again, looking back, the way you had it played out to make it more... fluffy, perhaps? Playful? I suppose what I said above would add more sensuality to it, but toh-may-to, toh-mah-to; it's all about interpretation.

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