I very much love your creativity. It's a very good idea to have such a thing happen in the world of Infinity between Syaoran and Sakura. The silence makes it especially deep and a little frightening. Love it! Keep it up!

Good imagery here. I like how it fits the tone and mood.

Aw... He should have kissed her back... Although I do like the ending.

Nice. You captured the mood of Infinity perfectly, and I for one thought everyone was very much in character -sigh- PostTokyo Sakura is so fascinating! Good job on this; I hope to see more from you!

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I really like this description of Infinity, it's quite easy to imagine. Syaoran's point of view is also very interesting in all the ways that he's different from his clone : listening to Kuro and Fai's arguments without intervening, simply trying to ignore the couple having sex and not being insanely embarrassed about it, recognizing he's in love with Sakura... Frankly though, I don't think Sakura would try to replace her Syaoran with this new one, but it's certainly crossed her mind. Anyway, you made it believable, and it is quite a rational and human reaction. Poor, poor thing :(
Nice fic :)

That was very well written - one of the more believable Syaoran Sakura kisses during Tsubasa.

Nice work.