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| TwilightGirl217 2008-05-11 ch 3,  | abusegreat story!! |
| TwilightGirl217 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseOMG! this is an awesome story!! - jessica |
| Rider Arya Svit-kona 2008-03-22 ch 3, | abuselol Loved that. I was cracking up most of the time. Arya |
| jacob-x-lover 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseok I vote Emmett wait no Alice wait Bella Oh I dono I like them all lol except Jasper |
| twilightlover543 2008-02-22 ch 1, anon. | abusethe song exceptional jasper sung well isn't that by jojo (i vote for bella) |
| ChibiKumiko 2008-02-17 ch 3, | abusethis is awesome m.a.n. ((hehe that says man XD)) i love the ending.. and the family song it makes me cry ^-^ oh by the way this is myxllo great job! ((make another with jacob XD)) |
| iamtabby 2008-02-16 ch 3, | abuseNah, it was not that bad. It was actually comical. I could actually see them all fighting on the floor and Esme breaking it up. |
| la mia stella 2008-02-15 ch 3, | abuseHah. That was beyond brilliant! I especially loved the part where Esme went gangsta. :D |
| marykro1 2008-02-14 ch 1, | abusehilarious i loved it |
| EdwardsMyHero 2008-02-14 ch 3, | abusei really liked it! |
| NiCk J iS oFf ThE cHaIn n H... 2008-02-14 ch 3, | abusesweetness |
| Forestwater 2008-02-14 ch 3, | abusewell-written, but very OOC. sorry, sorry, but i just can't picture esme being so self-centered, emmett being so . . . a combination of creepy and bratty, and edward so sulky. ditto for jasper. and bella would never really be scared of the vampires in a crying, wailing, boo-hoo kinda way. alice, however, is very in-character. sorry, sorry, sorry. i love the things you write, i just tihnk this one could be improved. really re-read the books, adn tihkn about how each character would respond to these kinds of things. I STILL LOVE YOU! . . . IN A PLATONIC WAY! |
| Twilight-Lover908 2008-02-14 ch 2, | abuseBella should win! We Are Family should be the group song! And I love the story! Your being added to my list! Twilight-Lover908 |
| socks 2008-02-13 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was really good! I was cracing up when I heard what Rosalie was singing!! I vote Edward =] |
| jade dragon618 2008-02-13 ch 1, | abuseomc that was awesome danm i cant decide they were all good er either alice or emmett goodnes rosalie idk u were like that wowie |