That was so cute I can't stop smiling now!

it is not lame... it is quite sweet actually

YAY! they got married

I LOVED it! Best fan fiction story ive ever read!

I love tsunade and jiraiya together! Jirtsu!

aww how cute

HAHAHAHAHA! He's like 'Are you drunk?' HAHAHAHAHA! That was funny. XD I'm afraid of the next chapter. .

I THOUGHT IT WAS GREAT I LOOK FORWORD TO READ SOME MORE

HEH HEH ;0

THANK U FOR GIVING NARUTO A SMART BRAIN AT THAT MOMENT. BUT LOOKING AT THE PREVIEW...THAT MIGHT GO RIGHT OUT THE WINDOW. LOL

HEH HEH HEH.(THAT WAS HOW I WAS LAUGHING AFTER CHAPTER ONE
HEEH HEEH HEEH(CHAPTER TWO
this is getting highly interesting to be honest. i wonder if naruto is gonna be in this story to do his hyperactive shouting.

Your stoery was awsome, just like that chapter:)

Awesome chap! YAY SHIGEN AND JIRATSUNA! OR WHATEVER! LOL loved the chap! Can't wait till the next story comes up!

AHMIGAH XD Do Japanese weddings go the same way as American? Cause I thought they weren't Catholic or Christian. xDD

Anyways,

Amigah I love ShizunexGenma but like I'm going against ShizunexAitorou (which will never happen for one,He's my character, and two, he's dead
Suckish? It was like 2903473748267832748393839408 levels above that! xDD I loved it and I'm looking forward to your next story!

Yay! Two new amazing chapters! I loved eleven.

That was wonderful chapter:)

Again: NANI!
XD

omg the crowd LUFFS THEM I SWEAR IF I WASN'T IN THAT CROWD I'LL HAVE YOUR HEAD XD jk

I bet you got the backgrounf awws from my fanfic DIDNT YOU XDD jk

lol LOVED ITT D