Well, is just a personal thought, nothing offensive. The way Apache is portrayed seems to be a whore who let Espada touches her for the sake of gaining more power. Though she was hurt by Grimmjow's uncaring side, she shouldn't act that way. But you had done well if you noticed, i felt angry about her action. That's how a true writer should be able to perform, but with a little more boost and development on descriptive and sentence improvement, i'm quite sure it will be better.

I just dislike the fact that Apache is a whore, allowing Szayel to get advantage of her for lame reasons.

Where there be any future Apache x Grimmjow Fics?

Maybe you should expand more on the whole brother-sister relationship or write a fanfic about it.

Do you have an obsession with this paring?

Apache is Ulquiorra's sister?

I totally loved it!It just screams SEQUEL,SEQUEL!Do you hear it? xD I certainly going,I really like your stories.
Gaara's cherry

that was so sweet! u got all the personalities of the chars just right O.O well done u
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-Does beady chibi eyes- AW SO DAMN AWESUM! u shud make more ficz like ths! great job and hope 2 c more from u soon.

Hey! I'm just some random girl telling you that i absolutely loved this story! Well, that's all I have to say I guess... Bye-Bye!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!

Whoa. SISTER? Again, whoa. Update soon, cuz I'm curious.

WTF. I wasn't expecting that! LOL. Update soon so I can learn what in the world is going on.